I have read the MLT version of this story and it was just extremely generic. The guy stays in the library, saves the clan, teaches two little girls secretly(I don't know what his obsession with teaching little girls is) but ya overall it was meh. It's like a copy and paste of all the other sign-in novels.
Please no Harem. As long as it's not a Harem, I'll like it at this point! Most Empress novels are Harem but I hope I'm wrong about this one. Looks interesting. I don't know how the Empress became a System though...
A Good Novel for a good brother:) you keep changing the links of your novel but anyway. You fixed minor grammar failures in this one it seems, it has became more attractive. I like this story as I said before but send the New chapters. I am waiting for a long time you lazy brother :)
Really good start, story sounds more reasonable than the other face-slapping fanfics out there, and love the family tag. Very few xianxia/modern genre with family at the start.
Although the writing can be a little spotty with imperfect prose snd spelling, the story itself is good enough to excuse it. Especially the start can be rough as it takes an almost painfully realistic approach to character development. Some humans could quickly adapt, but not everyone. This is why most of humans die off in the end of the world setting see. Zhang Dong is in the latter categor, a truly good person unfit for war. Fortunately he spawned in strong enough to be able to somehow live through it. He has come far through the story and still has a long way to go. I'm cheering for him, although I secrerly want him to get a 3rd child who just happens to have a constitution suited for evil. He did get seperated from his wife right after smex time. Of course, that is just my fantasy. This is a wonderful tale of a kind man with an even kinder heart. I do emphasise with him a lot through the story and I genuenly wish happiness to him. If you came here for mundane face slapping and murderhobo events, you are out of luck. This is a very gentle tale set in a not so gentle world. Zhang Dong had set his goal to change the world for the better, for everyone. I know that demonic cultivation is attractive to most folk, but keep in mind that Zhang Dong is a holy cultivator to the bone. Thank you author for writing what is arguably one of my favourite novels. :)
My first Review
I understand that this is the Author's first novel and said that the first 40 chapters might be a bit rough.
After Reading 9 chapters I was getting really annoyed about how many grammatical and spelling mistakes I could find. The Author doesn't use the words "The" and "a".
For example:
captian instead of The captian
young man instead of a or the young man said...
Gorilla said:"" instead of The gorilla said:""
Furthemore the Author switches from 1st person to 3r person wich is getting me really confused.
I had high hopes for this novel.
Author! I don't know if correcting the chapters is very time consuming but please fix them so people can enjoy this novel it's not like you have to correct the tiniest mistake just the noticable ones.
remind me of rebirth of urban immortal
raw link pls
Hopefully this novel better be good ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................because it's been a while since we read such synopsis
Just Giving It A Five Stars Because I like it that's all
Just Giving It A Five Stars Because I like it that's all
Just Giving It A Five Stars Because I like it that's all
Just Giving It A Five Stars Because I like it that's all
Just Giving It A Five Stars Because I like it that's all
Just Giving It A Five Stars Because I like it that's all
Just Giving It A Five Stars Because I like it that's all
Just Giving It A Five Stars Because I like it that's all
MTL trash, don’t bother. Just another low quality, OP MC, harem, money grab novel. Waste your time elsewhere.
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First you say hes six then you say hes eight. Pick an age and stick with it. Second the mc has MAJOR rapist vibes. No idea Why he just comes off that way
The story has a good amount writing and progresses at a manageable pace and for once the main character is not a wimp that gets fooled by every pretty face he sees.