KiritoK5
.....................................................................................................................................................................
Honestly a very entertaining tale, the use of spirit girls is great, and the MC and cast is hilarious. Can't wait for full release.
great story has a balanc system thatsnot to over powered only read a little bit but good so far
An Author shameless self-review. This novel is about many things, war, politics, morals and other things focusing primarily on one dynasty's rise to power in the game and the player behind it. But will also include and follow the stories of other dynasties in the game and their constant fight for power and influence.
I appreciate all feedback and read it all whether good or bad and hope you enjoy the novel
Before reading the story I hope everyone takes the time to read the author's note at the start of the novel as it lays out what you can expect from the novel so you are not too surprised by it
How do I say it
The hero is now in the female body
The hero will fall in love with a girl or a boy
I need to know this before I start reading
raw
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
11
11
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
11
11
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
A really damn good and funny novel. I don’t understand how it doesn’t have more readers. Good translation and editing too. Keep it on.
Seems like a good story I just wished there was a better translation because there are way to many Grammer mistakes and straight up just random. words in the middle of sentence.
nice novel, occasional grammar mistakes, sorta like your typical OP reincarnation vrmmorpg. but its in another time. so no OP knowledge where everything is
The start is a little bit rough but the pace is great and after the first few ten chapters the author starts to find his own story.
He is torture by his wife and get second chance but his hatred is sealed. Why? Because x say too much hatred will make him insane, but i read he is not insane when he is asked by x. Okay.
He can take stats from parasited thing, but after he get wolf body, he just eat the monster he killed npt use parasite skill so he get stat from the dead. Okay.
After he got treasure and BOOK from zodiak tomb without reading anything he just go to town. Okay.
You say he is bussines man but on auction, he just use 5 million gold coin as thought stone. Fu king
Too many contradiction.
