This story is getting interesting as FLBF and I hope it will continue to do so.
The protagonist needs a break???? I feel his pain and I'm not even married yet.??? Please just let him be happy for once. Such a poor soul???
Amazing thing, the events were fun, the character of mc is still volatile, mc is interesting especially to make humans a meal, but he must continue to drink blood, it is more useful than killing and getting a little strength because of the ring, and in order to hide evidence of it by burning or melting the corpses with some Solvent potions, good luck
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Hello. Answer to chapter 6. Most people are unable to even think for themselves. For real analyzes you have to be objective, but if you are objective good and evil disappear and only reasons and purposes exist. There is no evil or good. Only different purposes and reasons. For example, cannibalism. For most people it is evil, but for some groups of people it was the only way to survive because they had to give birth to lots of kids, more than they could feed due to huge death ratio. If you analyze lack of medicine, you understand that without it tribes would have died completely.
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It is a really great novel! Its full of surprises that shocks me everytime.. The protagonist is going through so many hardships at such a small age... But as the story is proceeding , unexpected things are happening which makes it more interesting to continue.... For now i have no idea what events will take place...i just cant wait for new chapters... I love this novel!
I AM THE EXP OF MY SWORD... EXP IS MY BODY... EXP IS MY BLOOD...I HAVE CREATED OVER 1000 USELESS REVIEWS...UNKNOWN TO LIFE,NOR TO DEATH...I HAVE WITHSTOOD THE PAIN OF CREATING COUNTLESS USELESS REVIEWS...YER THOSE HANDS WILL NEVER WRITE ANYTHING USEFUL...AND SO I PRAY...UNLIMITED EXP WORKSAND SO I PRAY
It is very interesting I feel like I'm not reading a translated novel but a full on english novel. The way the author use his words to describe the story and the narration is all on top level. The story development is also straight to the point, well atleast it doesn't use up 3 chapters just to describe what MC is doing, in like some wuxia novels - won't name names. I don't want be hunted haha. A lot of twist and turns, in a very exciting and thrilling way. Whew, so much to say but you just gonna have to read the novel yourself to know what I'm talking about. ✌
Juicy story. I like a lot. I also really want first review but I will update this as the story goes on due to the lack of content at the moment.
There is a requirement hidden and interlaced in the fabric of time around webnovel that says every author has a duty to write a review about their story lest a hand comes through your screen, rings your neck, and kills you...I didn't want to die so I decided to write a review...Feel free to ask me questions here about the novel, give me constructive criticism, call me names (nice ones), and also remember to add those comments to each chapter so I know how much you hate the story so I can make it worse...I mean... make it better... and tell me how much you love it...Thanks...
Holy **** dude can you fking explain anything????? Like wtf is happening in this goddamn world? Too confusing but it had potential... truly a pity since the author is obviously inexperienced and getting criticized, but he handled it pretty well by rewriting the chapters, but it still doesn’t make any sense