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This novel is quite boring. Especially if you have read similar eastern fantasy novels. Too much explanation no suspense(no cliffhangers) or trill. Nothing exciting happens in the first 15 chapters so I dropped it. On to the next one.
HMMM GOOOD SO FAR NEED MORE CHAPTERS THOUGH>MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Nice novel, please continue releasing chaptersDont drop the novel incompleted..........The power of mc is unique so i want to read it more
I'm really enjoying the story the plot is good and the writing style is also good please continue it's very entertaining and thank you for writing I hope to see and read more chapters in the future.
what a nice beginning I hope you can continue...............................................................................................
The writer of this novel is a Brazilian youtuber called "zy" who was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude photos with a minor girl who was one of his subscribers. She was about 15 years old.
I have read a lot of SYSTEM novels....but all lacked a solid story backing....But this blew away all my expectations.....System doesn't always indulge in the MC's life....No long queue of Shitty Quests...Everything related to the system is well proportioned...The story plot,background,pace and development are excellent compared to other System type novels...its too unbelievable that this the author's first try...HATS OFF TO YOUKEEP GOING
Been a pleasure reading it, especially before AM I LEWD ENOUGH, I feel like the story was not completed before it was shut down! maybe so as to focus on the new light novel(AM I LEWD ENOUGH), who knows. Anyway it been fun AND succeeded to erect me! forgive me for saying that, but it needs some depth in order to do so to me, thus, it is a good one not going to lie ?
Word Count : 15k + Amount of swears: BarelyGood plot: Yes, but rather wonky from time to time. Character design: Decent and memorable. A good one .
This story is so amazing!!! I reallt love your writing style. I got hooked by the first chapter of your book and this is a great book to read. I will definitely wait for more updates. Hope the author will update soon???
I've always been a sucker for the good vs evil stories, and this one certainly didn't disappoint. Writing quality is pretty good, and I totally recommend this
At times like this where Im too lazy to give a review I'll resort to spamIts good, Its good, Its good, Its good, Its good, Its great! Its a fantastic read.
