Deuteros

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The grammar was pretty bad; I could say he's not native to English like me. Although I like the story, I need to translate it in my head. Anyways, well done; I'll at least appreciate the hard work.

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Very interesting and novel read for me. I thought this would be similar to most dungeon-building novels but this is pretty hilarious and unique.The protagonist is a demon lord starting a new dungeon and with the help of his dungeon core- Bru, he started to hire these 'otherworldly' laborers commonly known as gamers. ???It's really a unique and hilarious look to see the gamers slave their way to work for the MC as they treat everything as a game. - review from ch 12

3/3/3/3/3 = 3quality= normal little to no grammar issueshard to follow, no backstory nor explanationUpdates = 3: stable, no mass releases nor chapters hiatus for more than 2+ days Story / Char / World : 3 mediocre descriptions of the actions etc, would help more if there was a backstory or glossary to help I'm borderline dropping it. not my cup of tea tbh, an Assassin Creed Style writing ..... just waiting for the intro < Assassins Creed ..... Elementalists> then the flyover of the eagle and then exiting the Animus

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What I like the most about the story is that it reminds me to the older wuxia novels (albeit plus a strong xianxia overtone) I read back when I was a child. Many of them tend to be somewhat labyrinthine in plot, with puzzles abound. There is an air of mystery and wonder that is often missing in today's wuxia novels.

4 days since the last update. Don't tell me your dropping the novel?mklmlkmlmklmklkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlkmlmk

dont care about my review as i dont even read the novel yet... its just i love this kind of genre the most... im tired of reading the student type novel... learning from that great person and this...if u know another teacher type story juat tell me pls

The series started out with a lot of promise. It quickly (within 5 chapters) devolves into the most stereotypical example of a generic xianxia you can imagine, with idiotic enemies inventing nonsensical reasons to come after the MC and acctractive women falling over themselves to give him presents at their first meetings.The translations are good, but the story is utter garbage.

These have to be the most shallow excuses for what the author calls humans. Nobody would think like they think in this novel, it hurts to read

I made it to chapter 17.  Translation quality seems totally fine.  Unfortunately the story itself is so bad that I cannot continue.  Basically the behaviour of the MC doesn't really match what a thousand year old monster would do, even though the author keeps bringing that up.