What is this faint sense of deja vu I’m getting?
Great novel. Hope that you ake some more chapters. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
can you please send the raw link? I haven't read it yet but the synopsis hooked me on. I hope the translations are good or at least readable enough.
Here is my honest review after 30 chapters:
Writing Quality: There are grammatical mistakes here and there, but it's acceptable and readable. You won't find the eloquence of a good cultivation novel, but it's still a passing grade. 4 stars
Stability of Updates: 7/week for now. Hitting the acceptable WN standard, so I gave this section 5 stars.
Story Development: The story is carried by the fact that MC changed genders. The pacing is good, but it lacks a lot of details on important parts. MC has almost no struggles, thanks to the super OP system she received. 4 stars. I would have given it less, but I felt it unfair as the standard of cultivation novels here is not much.
Character Design: The biggest weak point of this novel. Most of the characters have a personality, but the MC not only doesn't have one solid personality, but the author described her in a way, and she isn't acting like that. Also, the emotions are described but not felt in this novel at all. 3 stars
World Background: It's more or less explained. You don't get many details on how things look like. The story focuses on development more than details. You get the info you need, though, which will be enough for you as a reader, so I don't complain. 4 stars.
My subjective opinion: I started reading this one because the title piqued my interest. The current 35 chapters available were readable but sadly not enough to keep me going. So I'll be honest here. The story has potential, but the author is a beginner.
Focusing on the right things, giving details where it's needed, showing feelings instead of explaining them. And avoid absurd situations that wouldn't happen in the story you write. Also, it would help if you learned how to wait for the right timing when you want to write something that you always wanted to implement in your story.
Okay, my review turned into blatant schooling, and sorry for this. I hope the review helped the author and the readers alike:)
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didn't read but I 100% agree with Garresta this is the best title in the existence of titles, anyone who disagrees can fight me.
i really love the concept of this novel and how the fights was written very was intertaining i love it but there are some flaws but its still okay.
Not a review just a question (only gave 5 stars because I didn't want to mess up authors ratings for my question)
You said Mc isn't gonna have OP plot armor, but how is that possible if he has a system in the modern world?
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