king or the us game was not the only thing that was done to the world and it is a good story but the d I love it and the grass and the game was the water I had a very high quality of a building that I did with my own people who are not even the most beautiful children in a det to work with a family member and a parent who has an obligation 3rd or queen or a war in the world and that they will be in
The start of this is filled with cliches that happen because they should in this kind of novel. Clan gives a past genius years and lots of resources to cultivate again. He doesn't so they ignore the clan law that says to kick him out and instead give him a quiet and easy job in the middle of nowhere. In exchange, the MC sees them as a trashy clan and plans to abandon them because...??? They weren't happy that he was taking in all these resources? He knew why the resources the clan provided weren't enough for him to cultivate but didn't bother to tell them and then is angry at them for not just giving him everything because he wanted it. Yea. The MC isn't likeable at all. The plot seems pretty bland too. I'll pass on reading further.
This story caught my attention with the mis match of characters but somehow they work together. I like the references that are scattered across the chapters and the jokes that are hidden underneath. Just fix the Grammer and puntuation issue and this will be ?
yall this is such a good one wish there was more of it!!!
honestly not worth the read at all. the story is very basic and not well written. there is constant mistakes were it will say one thing and then immediately change it too another
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slow
slow
and slow
The MC's name is McGee.
Great novel
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Keep up the good work author .i am sure this novel will be discovered and rise up the ranks
Everyone is so knowledgeable about everything even though it’s only been a few days and they didn’t receive prior warning or anything. Not to mention, those guilds seem to be powerful right at the start but we have no idea when it was formed so it is safe to assume that they were formed right before/during the game decsended. There are multiple plot holes where the MC just magically appears somewhere.
The characters talk about talents a lot like “he probably has this talent” when it’s unclear how they have this much information??
The translation quality in my opinion is like something that was MTLed and then edited a tiny bit. this basically means half the things don’t make sense.
Currently on the latest chapter (60 something) and I’m going to continue reading because of the Christmas event thing and all this only costs 2 coins.
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