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the title is misleading since he didn't own the cultivation world but discover it instead but it's still a good read the story pacing is a bit slow but okay to me
Thanks author, very cool. ?Interesting story concept, can't wait to see what happens! I hope you dont this story. I want to at least see tanks run over knights before you give up.Thanks!
The story is fun to read but the title and description is VERY miss leading ... The MC is an Anti Hero not a demon king ... He is basically a Hero who doesn't feel the need to save every cat he sees in a tree.
The story development looks wonderful...I took an overview and it seems nice.... everything seems so clear to understand...names of characters are no difficult to carry-on with....
the plot was good. but clearly the author writes to fill the daily word count ( i.e money) not for the quality the story doesn't even progress for hundreds of chapters. focusing on things that holds no relevance to the core story. really disappointing
the author tries to focus so much in the explanation of cultivation that it becomes annoying at times. the cultivation levels are messy and all over the places
Really very good, thanks my day today, as a writer I have to admit my inferiority, his writing, lightness and natureness make me wonder and I love this MC that cultivates other MC from the bottom of my heart.
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Hey, how are you all doing? If you stumbled onto my novel out of pure chance and gave it a shot, I want to let you know I appreciate the gesture.
Whether or not you liked it, I'm still glad that you gave it a chance. My novel's a bit unorthodox by Webnovel standards, so it doesn't pull in the largest crowds, per se. But I'm still having loads of fun writing it, nevertheless.
For those of you who did find it interesting, please stick around and watch the story unfold with me. At the very least, I promise it'll be a unique tale, haha.
Hope to keep seeing my silent lurkers read on for many days to come; love you, shy boys!
It's too early to say that the book is really good. Yet, it is good so far with its character development and slow yet impactful pacing. I'm giving it the benefit of a doubt. I hope that it really gets better.
So I like the way the novel is written, but a little more description would help the audience connect with the world. Like set the scene before going into it, so the reader can imagine that scene behind the characters. Example would be two characters fighting... but you can give like even 3 lines of description on a jungle behind them, will allow the reader to place a jungle background behind then, rather than a plain white void. Also, the updates have stopped, I hope you will continue then soon
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