I really don't understand the Novel's 1st place.The novel isn't bad as is, there is a lot of potential in the world building. The characters, while not quite there yet, aren't really bad. The main characters that is. Most side characters pretty much don't have any depth at all.I don't particularly like the way the school life is described. It's a military school. Even if they want students to experience a rough life, students "disappearing" each year? Yeah, who would care about that...There's also other things I consider plotholes that annoy the heck out of me. First describing portals as a precious technology that is only in the hands of three kinds of people, but nevermind the fact that the "dangerous" red portal is accessible at a school, how come there are no guards/you can simply enter?All in all, a good approach but the plot really seems too unlogical to me at times.
This book is sufficient in possessing the necessary plot thickeners, abilities to astound the imagination, characters to both cheer with wild abandon and also to carry grievous hate.... and that's enough for the review. Still the book is dope though. Minimal grammar errors. Super good plot twists. Two thumbs waaay way up
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Interesting story
Love the story
Absolutely loved this book!! Can’t wait to read the next one.
love it
Ok was a good book
update please...I love ur books and ur way of writing is amazing but u update so late.....
Need more chapters
the book was amazing need sequel
too slow updating new chapter and once its released only new chapters. how come you are so heartless to make us waiting after spending alot of money to read your novel. be more readers friendly can you?