Love this...This is piece isn't just of art, it's fine art.I would recommend my friends to read this.This is what I'm going to call "The Best of The Best"
Look overall this story had so much potential. Based on the idea of the dragon gate anything could become a dragon. However, right off the bat we see problems propping up. In the beginning MC Silk Farmer accidentally eats poison and sleeps w/ FMC. Obviously she’s so BEAUTIFUL and a Virgin and she’s now tainted or whatever cause MC is low class. But they escape. The escape was ehh. FMC is supposed to be some super talented conqueror or whateva but she useless.Next introduce stereotypical love rival. And MC pretends to be a servant to FMC. Love rival asks questions to check if MC is really a servant , so he asks about dragons. MC obviously replies.Here’s the thing though, throughout this entire time we’ve had to piece together small pieces of the past MC’s life. And while that’s not bad as a mysterious plot element, it’s poorly executed and leaves the story feeling jagged and disjointed. Later on we find MC was a super talent cause of course he was but his dragon regressed into silk worm I guess. Etc etc. either way tons of plot holes.Tldr: stereotypical plot with stereotypical chaRacters and below subpar execution. Could’ve been really good if they just built up things better. Read if you can turn off your brain and just suspend disbelief CONSTANTLY
I think this is one of the best story on this site, while most stories on this site can have there main characters replace with a block of wood with a face drawn on it and still be the same due to the character being bland, for example most characters are cold and merciless, while killing people there never seems to be anything that can stop them so the character never develops and so for 1000+ chapters it the same old thing happening i.e young master mess with MC then gets there hold clan murdered by MC, and then we never hear about that event again like it never happened. now this novel takes a more realistic look at this kind of story where the MC who is just a normal person at first is throw into a unknown world and is force to adapt, his personality doesn't just instantly change without a reason and her reacts to everything like a normal person would i.e afraid, cautious and confused. if you think about it this reaction make more sense than suddenly becoming a godly killing machine and all of this actions have a cause and affect to the story.my only complain is on the systems I wish the Writer would make more sense on what the system can do and explain more on the system so I can feel better know before hand that the system has some kind of ability instead of pulling it out of thin air.over all I think this is a excellent novel and I hope that Writer keep up the good work.
Love the premise, hate the execution. The author uses the MC marrying a fox demon as little more than an excuse for the super natural organization to pay attention to him. No lovey dovey newlywed antics. No heartfelt "I know your a Demon fox, but I love you anyways" confession. Not even an explanation for why he can see her tails poking out of the bottom of her dress at the wedding, but nothing about them when they sleep together. There is almost zero world building at all. This is a modern world where spiritual energy is awakening causing creatures to transform. That's it. The MC and his wife are apparently well of but nothing about what there jobs are. Only off hand mentions of the MC having just finished a big project and a casual "Oh, by the way" revelation that his wife works at a kindergarten in chapter 20 when she tells him he needs to drop her off early today for the field trip.I really love the idea behind this book, but it needs more focus on the relationship between the MC and his wife to make the readers care about them. The jealous superior at the supernatural organization, who everyone knows is just a two-bit side character villain, gets more screen time than his beloved wife. I really hope it gets better in the future and the author is just trying to draw it out so that the relationship doesn't feel rushed or forced but right now if feels almost non-existent.
The story has a promising premise. Down the road, I noticed there were too many abrupt time-skips in a single chapter. While this is inevitable, please consider a time-skip once every other chapter or so if necessary and use the chance to elaborate more about characters. Settling that aside, as other had pointed out, there are grammatical errors, incorrect uses of punctuation marks and chopped sentences. I'd suggest getting an editor to help you with this issue and you could focus more on fleshing out your main plot.
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For those that don't enjoy read things that involve man on man action, don't read this. The overall concept of the story is exquisite but the gay stuff was a turn off.
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Im giving 0 stars if i can, suddenly lock chapters when it wasnt before, it would be fine with me if you just locked the recently new chapters, but old chapters get locked and starting at around chapter 200? do you think thats not greed? thats not enough to feel the fun reading the stories and make me your daily readers. For the next reader, goodluck having irritated waiting daily.
I just finished reading its raw..... really a very good pet novel...but on qidian website ...it is on hold for about /more than months....so, did webnovel staff contact him about his status on this novel....if not then we are only going to get read novel till...chapter 277....so, please tell us did this novel gonna update in the future or not.....
Probably one of the 2 best CN novels of 2018-2019. My House of Horrors and Lord of the Mysteries. Nothing much to add, the high ratings speak for themselves.