i hope this keeps going and i really liked the plot the most which make it unique please don't make it fast forward make the plot more understandable, because most of the novels i read first came like very smooth and when it keeps going i don't understand where the plots are going, and most of all it's like they want to end the story so please keep going and focus on what you gotta write okay!! :3oh also please don't make all the characters love at first sight make it reasonable why they fell for her or admired her (u2060•u2060u2060▽u2060u2060•u2060;u2060)
This story made me long for a feeling of brotherhood. You know just being understood at a primal level. Like you know how when we read romances we start to feel the need for romance in our lifes. Stories aren't really able to depict that with friendship.There is a feeling that one protagnist reallly gets the other protagnist. A idealestic depiction of understanding between two people.Not only enjoying each others compaines but struggling to achieve something which matters more than life itself together. the best thing about this story is that protagnists aren't reactionary. They work together for there own ambition not because something forces them to do that.How many stories have people leaving friends and family to achieve there dreams instead of going along passively with the plot because someone stole your mc guffin .read it because there is no better feeling than having ambition for something at any cost and having a friend which goes "I desire the same thing i would never give up, Brother" .Then discussing about that thing with him. Especially when you have been denied it for so long.It's a feeling like loving to sing spending almost all waking moment perfecting the craft but everyone you know is deaf . They love you but they can't appreciate it with some passion as you and then meeting another singer.I am intrested even though i am usually not intrested in non portal fantasy type of stories.I am actually intrested in this. It made me feel like something diffirent. Like not only i enjoyed it i also felt a need for such a brotherhood type friendship after reading the story.Style: pretty good. not average. better than average.Grammer: I don't know enough grammer to rate this. Wasn't able to spot mistakes.Story It's a new and unique feeling. Prologue is one of the best things i read. Not once i looked at a character in the story and thought "what a idiot". The story isn't unique but it really conveys emotions well. It's probably something subtle i can't put my finger on.
Shameless author review here.Hey! I'm the author for this series, and I hope you enjoy it! If you have any comments or suggestions please let me know! Ideas for potential plot directions are also welcome.Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy my series!As I am a man of culture, this series is not harem.
The MC is a deplorable and submissive S.I.M.P. There really is no reason for it and just seems to happen for gags and giggles, but it gets old really fast. The story also gets derailed often and many times where the mc could just say 'no' to bothersome stuff, he took it upon himself to say yes and whine about it. The simpening started around 23 ch.
Honestly love the novel so much, The progression especially the relations ships are slow and so far im legit coming back every day to check for a new chapter, hope the author comes back to update it because im IN LOVE!!!!!!!!
Destroying a mountains because my favorite characters die..... hahahahahshah
Martial Universe is also another name for this book. It's also on Webnovel as well with many more chapters.
I highly recommend reading it as the book is very well done.
I randomly came across this book to get a change of my normal reading pace. So far it is a very good read and I look forward to continuing to follow along on the journey!
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Another pet novel i hope this will be great and i will be starting to read it hehe cause the other novel I'm reading is to slow update....?