primodial
Good villain novel with an mc that does what he wants without caring about others feelings. So far the plot has been exciting, writing quality is good, updates stable, charas maybe need a little more depth but its fine as is.
I can’t believe nobody left a review for the story. This is an amazing find. At first, I was a little hesitant to continue since the premise has been done a lot, but I am glad I gave it a chance.
Before I knew it, I binge read the entire novel thus far, 29 chapters, in one sitting because of how absorbed I got into it. The character interactions are top notch and they FEEL complete.
They have multiple sides to their personality and aren’t one-note which is great. The interactions are funny and well thought out honestly, but an editor would be appreciated, the grammar gets in the way of the story but not too much since it is actually legible.
I don’t have fo spend a minute abusing my brain to translate what the author meant, which is nice and more than I can say about a lot of novels.
Only thing I have a nitpick at, is that it is going a little too smoothly for him. But it’s not too big of an issue since as the story progresses there are some undertones of discontent and jealousy form others leading me to believe some conflict will occur eventually, but slowly and naturally.
All in all, I highly enjoyed and recommend this to anybody who read my review.
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First off want to say that the idea behind this novel is amazing and I love the concept but when the original novel is not based in the United States at all and they suddenly start translating everything to be in America with American names losing the original flare it had. I’m getting annoyed it is very obvious that this was a novel planned and set in Asia could be China Japan or South Korea or maybe even North Korea but it is extremely obvious that this novel has Nothing to do with America. Please web novel stop trying to appease the English readers you have and keep the stories as their original it makes it betTer that waY
This novel was really good, I like it but their conversation is really awful. I know you are a poet author but don't do this, you have a translator. I thought reading Machine translation but all in all good novel but still i really don't like being a poetic one its like kinda hypocrite doing like this.
I find it interesting that the guy wasn't the usual oddball. he was reasonable and wasn't one to just act out. The story is really interesting starting in a new world. I like it!
it's back and with better translation this time pretty acceptable
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one of the best novel ever. the dialogues are incredible, the story reaches you spiritually, sexually and mentally.. it's just amazing. the author knows to surprise you and make you laugh like the silliest kid in the park. it's just great, and even beyond that. (these are just based off the first 10 chapters, how great are the next ones?)
the more i read the more i dislike it
survival type ... DISLIKED [img=faceslap]
slow-paced ... DISLIKED
arrogant characters wording ... DISLIKED
hidden dangers without inference ... DISLIKED
ignorant protagonist ... DISLIKED
heavy atmosphere ... DISLIKED
score ... 1.0 [img=faceslap]
yamite kudadasai.......... ahhhhh ahhhhh ahhhhhhh.............. sugoi................ .......................................................
This is a breath of freshness among cultivation novel mostly having a chaotic evil protagonist,
I am enjoying it so far the scenarios are nicely explained will look forward to moreeee
This one is kinda similar to other "Reincarnated as NPC in game" types of novels. It is much more fleshed out compared to other trial read novels. The 1st 3 chp are kind off a prologue and so it might be confusing. If you read ahead, you will see that the plot moves ahead pretty well. The translation sucks though as words are constantly omitted among sentences.
