primodial
Great description, edgy plot and overall good writing.
One of the best I've read here even though it's just 3 chapters in
I hope the writer keeps up with the good work and also keep up with the update... it is highly needed because of the we that lack patience;)
And to those who are thinking, sould I read... READ! IT'S AN ORDER!
If you were given a chance to go back in time, what moment of your life would you choose to go back to? Why would you want to go back to that moment?"
I am raring this 5 stars even though I have not read it yet. I have read the synopsis and I have a request about it. I think that it needs a better explanation because I don't think it's that interesting because of it. If you maybe added a paragraph from the book then it may seem more interesting in my opinion.
I love how sci-fi and romance were both at play in this story. the writing quality was great, there were few errors but I love the play of words and the combination of poetry and prose within the writing style. it's beautiful. the characters and world background were also amazing. Overall, it is an amazing work of art. keep it up!
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Author of this book, shameless review here however I've gotta do it regardless! it's a slowburn story but I promise it's worth the read! it's a fantastical adventure with mystery and Intrigue, you'll love it.
This is a better premise for base system story. However grammarb is terrible words not making sense at times. Gender of characters sometimes incorrect. The unit of measurements way to exaggerated. Example given away 5 tons of water per person. For people to be poor no way they could transport that much water let alone store it. I would go back and proofread thoroughly.
Upadates are too slow. We need a chapter release every 2 hours
If you are looking for something fun and a lot of kickarse action this one is def where you need to go to looking cause seriously one of the best villain stories period! I would look no further because you ain't gonna find anything this good elsewhere! ;3
very good begginer novel, ang ganda nang flow ng stories tas nagustuhan ko yung concept na iba iba ang stories kada chapter pero may times na nakakabitin hehe but overall love it.
For the first time i read. I feel like this story is awesome. I can feel what MC feel. keep your hard work
The beginning is truly captivating and doesn't allow us to back out from there.? It starts out with many confusions but I think that's what makes this story mysterious and makes us want to learn more. The author know how to awaken our curiousity?
