Ugh. Mention of IQ in description is a dead giveaway of retarded story.
How could author possibly write about someone with six times his IQ? It is not even parody. Dismissed.
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Not able to understand the story flow and and the time skips make this a horrible read.
Ex :- Chapter 3-5 the whole time line is messed up.
Bye
My opinion about this novel at the start was good even the part with lecia and mark i honestly didnt care that much like other people did but it was the part when the mc fought joe and explained to everybody most of his secrets is when i decided to drop this mc loses all his skills to a nobody just for plot he has a ring that can edit your status and he only uses for once instead of using it to its fullest potential and he seems kind of emotionless like its hard to care about him he couldve died to joe and joe became the new mc and i wouldnt have cared like your sister was being raped for months and he really didnt care and the main enemies are super op they just gave a man a skill that takes skills with a touch like nothing all in all this isnt a novel to read if you love good plot or want to care about charcters this is just the type of novel that you should read if you like dumb op mc
Excellent writing structures and usage of grammar. Everything is very detailed, which is to my liking. Apart from stability of chapters published, everything is great. Keep up the good work!
Second shameless review!!
After writing more than a hundred chapters and being contracted, I felt I should do a review and say what I think about the book.
Q. Will there be a harem?
A. I have added multiple female leads to the story now and they all have things going on in their lives. Sophia and Marigold are traumatised and Kivela is trying to find her place in the world. Osmond also is rather young now, so I don't know.
Q. Is the book dark?
A. Yes it is. I have given warnings at the beginning of dark chapters.
Q. Will there be a system?
A. I have not added the tag because the story as of now, doesn't have a system. But I am planning to bring a character with a reincarnated character with a system in the future, so I guess I should add those tags.
Q. Writing quality?
A. I am a writer who has just started. English is not my first language. I am improving every day and with every word I write. And with that, I also have found out that my initial chapters are bad compared to the latest ones. So I am planning to go back and edit the whole thing once volume one is completed.
Q. When will volume one be completed then?
A. It's in the last arc now. I am planning to write five volumes for this book if everything works accordingly.
Q. Chapter update?
A. I try to update one chapter a day. I am currently writing with my mobile and it is a hastle.
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Bruv, mc is the Cold Jade Beauty? I can’t stop laughing
This is one of the few novels I've consistently read since I found out about it and is one of the best crafted stories I've ever found. I would highly recommend this to anyone who is interested in a cultivation novel and if you like this genre I doubt you'll regret reading it.
I particularly appreciate the intelligence of the main character and find his personality very convincing. Also, I typically skip through battles in novels like these because I feel like they drag out too long, but here I can't think of many times where I felt like the story dragged them out too long.
a fun read !
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Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Ever heard of overgeared? This is kinda like this, from the synopsis anyway.
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