Reading status: 115 rawsIt was a decent novel, then nationalism infected it like a plague.Huaxia is the strongest. Huaxia cares for human lives unlike the baddy nation Indo-Union (Did they forget the early chaps where MC was used as a bait by the govt??).My guess is that the novel was written during China-India border conflict. Because in this novel, Indo-Union (Union of South asian and middle east nations) are portrayed as evil and shameless. Chapters after chapters have sentences that say how Huaxia ancestors suppressed indo-union, they describe indo-union as morally reprehensible and weak compared to Huaxia.Based on how we hear about other federations such as euro-union, my guess is that their turn is coming as well.This could be awe-inspiring for Chinese, but for international community, it is simply filled with racism and shit. A solution could be to change the name of nations in translations. Well, if it gets picked that is.
Naturally, being the author, I will be the first to comment.Just here to say that This is a project I have been working on for the past 2 months~ approximately....So enjoyUpdates should be daily for the first week, then 3 chapters per week from then onwards
I Love It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a good system novel, the author did a great job in giving us the information about the characters they are on point and very easy to understand, I read a lot of system novels and this one is really good, I suggest you give it a try even the writing quality is good.
This is a must recommebd for those who thirst for a good romance, good novel. Must read guys, you will enjoy reading this novel. Hope you will post the next chapter soon.
Disclaimer: I have enjoyed this story and like the premise but this is a complaining review. I still highly recommend giving this a try. These are just the problems I think exist and they haven't stopped me from continuing to read this.
As I read this I come across a few critiques/personal opinions.
1. The human race is said to be spaceworthy and traveling to other planets, conquering or making alliances with other races. Yet throughout the story the scale never really feels like that is the case. It consistently feels like the only people in existence are the characters introduced 'on screen'. Ex. He is on a world where the race is said to have been in control of the entire planet and yet I never felt like there were more than a few dozen people living there. Most of the story takes place in training camps that barely seem to have any people.
2. His relationship with the alien woman, Liiza, has come to dominate at least half of the story and is tiring at this point to read about. It was interesting at first but now it is just repetitive. The story stopped being about the MC getting stronger and traveling the universe to find his enemy and now it's all about how he will do anything for his relationship. The relationship that multiple times in the story has been said to be 'toxic'.
3. I've noticed this in many stories. When an author wants to make his MC seem smarter or better they will make their superiors dumber or incompetent to lend credence to the MC. This happens here with the MC's military command. Someone in command should not be so flustered or easily persuaded by a teenage boy. Even if the said teenage boy has 'magical alien trauma' giving him OP powers and plot armor.
Yet another great book from Zent. The story is brilliant and always has me on tenterhooks.
Thoroughly Underrated.
This is one of the most unique novel i have read . the world building is solid and characters emotions can be feel . keep up the good work and i want more more More MOre MORe MORE MORE MOREEE MOR
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Honeslty I like the concept but the mc's senior brother who is the sect leader flat out ruins the novel for me. Such an incredibly forced character. To say he's bad at pill refining is an understatement but the author has created him as a character who childishly and stubbornly refuses to accept that fact, and instead of actual effort/development, it becomes a meme that trashes the novel. The sheer obliviousness to his own failure makes it an absolute joke.
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Great book author! The writing style has no flaws that I could fin, the story is pretty great to read and the characters are well developed as well. Looking forward to more chapters for sure.