Main character is the epitome of reused reincarnation plot. Reveals so many of his cards early on when he has no power and no cultivation. Attracts people who want his knowledge. Probably will fight against them. Repeat.
Also introduces him as some almighty expert that “accidentally died” without any explanation.... no enemy?
Just oops...
I tripped over a rock and died as one of the top 10 cultivators.
Hi, the auther is here.I am writting a Eastern fantasy with the R-18 genre, so there will be lot of romance and *** content...If you any questions, leave a comment
This novel is good for the following reasons 1. The world building is good base on that the Author didn’t do the world building in one go2. The MC intelligence is consistent through the novel ( unlike other novels )3. The MC didn’t have game breaking elements for example MC levels 50 vs some mobs characters levels 100 the winner is MC with some flesh wound (in other words power doesn’t mean anything when you’re the MC) I’ll add more if I see more The novel is good. Did I say good? I mean very good.To be onus this novel is better then those paid novels so far.This novel should go premium. (I don’t know how a novel goes premium so... good luck)
nothing is bad in this book. Sure, the VRMMORPG trend is becoming annoying, but this one takes a different perspective. The world background seems great. The character development is quite realistic so far.
I just read the 1st chapter after having had this novel for a long time in my library and it promises a lot of reading pleasure, however I remember that there was a chapter which reca** the energy cultivation levels but it is no longer there I wonder if you could put it back for ease of understanding when reading.
The characters, the events and the plot are quite stunning. The words used are wonderful and catchy. I hope I can be a writer like you. Keep it up!