This really is a good novel, a mixture of reality and fantasy with some western elements. I enjoy how the MC is a “non-human” which is something I always enjoy. The writing quality is great and I can’t find many serious mistakes, although there are a few barely noticeable ones.
The update schedule is beautiful, with a chapter a day(which is quite tiring to do if you run out of back up chapters, so +108 Respect)
The world background is still a bit confusing to me but I believe it will be easier to understand as I keep reading
The character and story is also great. With Danika being fun to follow on her adventure.
Of course if I needed to give a complaint, it is that not a lot of people have notice this novel yet, what is up with that?
I hope you keep doing a great job author and I unfortunately can’t say anything to help you improve since your skills are much better than mine
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Amazing story❤️lots of unexpected twists and had my mouth dropped while reading it! Thank you for writing this author!
Website : qidian china
Views : 11.89 million
Rating : 8.4(2607)
Chapters : 1168
Status : completed
Word count : 3.78 million
author rank : platinum
Very bad
Don't read
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Ibreally likebthis novel.
Tbh the amount of breastmilk the mc is getting is kinda ridiculous. But i love the mc so it's kinda okay. Finally a novel where not betrayed pro player reincarnates to play game with his outstanding martial arts and in game knowledge. But an old man who we dont know anything about. I mean seriously. How can he fight so well?
Honestly I haven't read the story yet but I saw in the description that there was no romance. The fact that there is no romance and it is stated in the description and guaranteed deserves a five star review in and of itself. The yell of excitement I give when I saw that was hilarious. The amount of times I've had to stop reading a good story because they introduce romance makes me weep. So thank you Author. I dont start a story until at least fifty chapters but for this story I'm going to break that rule. I'll right another review when I catch up with the story.
The author uses things like sexual assault just for the shock factor. Things don't really feel realistic and the introduction to the MCs life before transmigration goes on for several chapters.
I love the storyline of this novel and how you to describe the world is quite good for me, but you must improve your writing technique and grammar
overall, i like it!
I'm tired of this scenario. You are not a god, you are ahead just because you have acquired these abilities, otherwise your destiny is to die in pain. As someone who loves evil mc, this novel is 0.
I've been on the hunt for a fantastic sports novel, and I've finally found it! This book hits all the right notes.
So far at least this book is an absolute winner.
Hi! I've read your story and really liked it! But it is sad for me not to find any of your social medias to talk with you. As a reader, i hopw i can talk with you about the book. The plots, characters and settings all bring me such a fantastic reading experience. I can understand you are busy with your novel. But i hope we can have a chance to communicate with each other.