I can see some great sci-fi coming up with some superb settings, keep it up Aurthor, added to my collection and will catch up with progress.
Came for Tigers, didn't expect the bigotry. Way too much Nationalism. I mean how is there so much Nationalism in a story about animals? This story could have been a lot better.
Not bad there is room for development with some creativity you should be able to get up and running in no time
18 chapters a week? wow thank you for putting so much in this novel :) .....................................................................
Mc is stupid, i read 4 chapters and he didnt show any intelligence, he has memories from past life so he should be able to conect lightning with girlWhy author changed very basic, common and understandable terminology is unknown. I read the chapter where it explained what each is, by next chapter i forgot which was attack and defense.Why author keeps shifting to the girl explaining every little fucking thing i dont know but its annoying as hell, most authors assume their readers have common sense but this one doesnt I dropped novel due to these ridiculous mistakes
No complaints with the story or character development. Love how dark it is getting and hope he finds more people to join the dark side with him. Love how Julie has a string personality as well as the other two so far hope that as more are added their character development isn’t neglected. Keep it up.
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Writing is ok, story is messy and confusing, some dialouge is cringy especially the nightmare guy though I think he's supposed to be like that, the update speed is fast though