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This is a good story. I hope improvements will come and uploading chapters bit faster will help you establish a good foundation for your novel
great novel i can say this is one ok jxs best work extremely disappointed that he discontinued it and is not making this part of the jks universe but plzxz jks if you are reading this plzz continue even if 1 chapter is weak plz or 1 ch a month even plz this could be really good like the world after mws and could tell the story of sen's sword or smtn in mvs kinda plz
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This the best Dragon novel I have ever read... After this I also tried other novels of the author those are not bad but this one sets the standard really high... It's my personal bias but I would like the author invest more in this novel as a reader and a Dragon enthusiast...
Don't read this after like a few hundred chapters, it really goes completly downhill, tried to finish this, buts it almost impossible to read with being infuriated by the same cliches used over and over again and the same lazy writing...does this guy not know how to write anything other than "mc (teamate) gets injured and he must rise up" among other things.
Imma just go ahead and leave a review even though there arent many chapters. So far this is pretty good, I like the gacha system and the grammar is pretty clean. I do like how the MC is working towards the core formation realm and then setting up a sect. He isnt given a run down sect nor a cultivation base at the beginning. I dont mind that he drew a rare cultivation method which alloes him to level up faster because it was his first draw and those draws are always luckier than others. Anyways, thanks for taking the time to write this novel Author. ?
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UpTo 100 chapter- it is good
101-200 chapter- medium
200+ it is garbage
This is unique. The author's was clearly having fun parodying the urban genre - what's more, the translator is clearly having fun too translating the work (as evident by all the translator notes).
As for the story itself, you have a protagonist who actually has the capacity to be the antagonist for once. He's not afraid of getting his hands dirty, manipulating people, or forcing others into despairing circumstances if it'll achieve his goals. Of course he didn't start like this, in the beginning he was still rather merciful but a few interactions with Ye Tian (protagonist template) the MC learnt that compassion is the ultimate weakness. Further plus points, the system is low-key, usually unoffensive, and the plot of the MC struggling against all odds against Heaven's Chosen (the MC) is very entertaining to read about.
strong guy takes possesion of a new and weak body a lot of time after his defeat, in other novels the mc just goes on their faceslapping journey, this guy intead bothers with information gathering and testing to make his knowledge up to date, and while gathering power in secret he needs to pay attention to not leave any track of his works because he is not yet the smartest or strongest in the continent. thats a pretty good thing for me
The idea is original but while usually i dont really care about grammar and punctuation,the sentences structuring makes it hard to read and immerse yourself in the story. But the biggest downside for me, and thats a personal opinion, is that your first few chapters should only be about the mc, yet all 4 of the first chapters have different 1rst person povs wich is one of the things i dislike the most since i like to immerse myself in the mc and i dont have split personalities.