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Reading the first few chapters I was intrigued with the story, it had potential. However the grammar and writing are confusing, this is harsh but I can barely understand the story.
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at least this story is decent and it's been a while since there is a novel about pc game like King's Avatar or at least not a VR game.
Hope this could get picked up
I hope this gets picked! Seems interesting
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2. Kill Sons of Fortune and gain infamy to obtain huge amounts of cultivation points that will help Master become the strongest person in the world.
Sons Of Fortune: What is the evil that I have done?
I love this novel a really good book. Haven't had such an interesting Mc in a long time. The Mc keeps what the author promises and is not a wimp.
I can't wait to read how the story continues.
Forced plot, cringe anime-esque dialogue every now and then, characters somehow just as strong as the MC for no logical reason, hero complex MC
If those havent turned you away, you’ve got no hope. This novel looks appealing at first with its world building and then it slaps you in the face around chapter 50 with a sudden change to a hero complex MC who starts acting like a complete idiot. Everyone around him suddenly becomes super powerful despite being literal cannon fodder. Everything the MC goes through in terms if challenges are just useless. The MC is not strong mentally or physcially. He can be overwhelmed by two white/blue trial randoms and manipulated but some businessman.
Such a disappointment.
As a dedicated fan of your works, I just have to leave a review, no matter how simple and short. Great plot, dynamic characters. Can't wait to see how Mian will go about using his new powers.
Good read. This is an interesting thriller. Although I was amazed by the Table of contents. and I know that there are alot more chapters coming. I can never create a table of content beforehand lol.
good read
This needs to get picked. Flaws:-Poor worldbuilding-The cultivation realms have not been explained yet (CH 19)-Story is shallow-Slightly wonky translations, still very understandable though. I’ve read far worse, this is very much tolerable.Merits:-Fun read.-Better than most of the stuff that gets picked nowadays.-Decently conceptualised system.Overally I’d give this a 3/5 it I’m giving it a 5 cuz I want it to get picked.
I'm giving my novel 5 stars because I know the future of this story.Those who are hasty judges should ignore my novel because the real story will start from 30th chapter.MC is an innocent lad who will evolve into a ruthless villain, the first 30 chapters are about background story, reasons and training. This novel contains seggs/smut, cunning strategies and atrocities. it will be a unique novel, I will work hard on it.Join the journey with MC and see how The Atrocious Werewolf Prince terrorize the worlds.I am open to ideas and constructive criticsm as well, feel free to contact me on discord. link is given in synopsis.