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FIRST....I've already taken this Novel "Virginity" ?????????????????????????????????????????????????
I will just say it..I will post this just to warn any inncoent readersThis novel contains at least three case of ntr so drop it if you don't want the sadness
I didn't even read a single chapter of this novel.author you should do something about the picture you choose for novel cover, even though these drawings are good but you should use picture like other novels.sometimes I didn't even want to read the synopsis just because these colorless drawing feels like an eyesore.
it's a better version of Animal assassin groupwith a better mc and lesser amount of plot holesBut only 5 chapters have been released till yet, so it is still to be seen whether it will have extreme fillers like the pet one
Simply awesome!You only make 6 chapters but the battle is already so awesomeI can imagine if this light novel converted into manga, it will easily surpass many chinese wuxia mangaThis light novel is strongly recommended for anyone who likes manga, after seeing this you might wish that there is manga version of this!
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A novel that from the beginning, gave me a smile, but I must say that the Priest is sometimes the best magicians only that they are undervalued.As for the rest of the episodes, I would like to say that I imagined your main character saying, "rabbits are the fruit of the forest, you can make them roasted, baked, with vegetables, in hamburger, with pepper, in a skewer, in a stew. .. "
The writing quality is not the best but it is readable and it doesn't make it less enjoyable.The stability of updates isn't the best but the chapters are long, detailed and of great quality.The story has developed in an interesting way and I can't wait to see how it will develop further.the character design is great and you can see that there is some though behind it.The world background is the same as earth but there are gods that rule over it, what they do in the story is easily explained in the first few chapters.My opninion about the book is althoug the writing quality isn't as high as I hoped it would be but the quality of the story and the information given in the story is of great quality. I recommend this book to everyone to atleast give it a shot.
i really loved this novel and i hope the second novel fir the auther will be also amazing and give us a lot of surprise like this novel ??????
My gosh, your writing is explicit and the background is well explained. The characters were well taken care of. Your command of language is impeccable... I will save and read from the app to give chapter and paragraph reviews..nice job...
Enjoying a different take on the beginning of the typical cultivation novel, with characters that aren't just caricatures of the standard tropes. We finally get an mc that seems like a real person, not everyone is instantly out to kill him, god the scene where there was good parenting made me literally cheer out loud. Anyway its refreshing and i hope it stays stable
