i read this on royalroad just here to help you xD .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Haven’t read this yet but i see you haven’t updated this novel in a month author. Have you dropped the novel??
Currently completed till chapter 400 and I just can't stop myself to give a review . I regret that I found such a amazing character like Nan Hua so late but also sad that I will soon be covering till present chapter and torture myself while waiting for updates soon ?. Our FL is everything I love in a female lead . How can u not adore her ! ? And the siblings love for each other warms my heart. The characters development were gradual and I m seriously liking how slowly their progress is described . The world building is very detailed . Writing quality too is great. Novel's Plot is interesting. Especially love the War and politics elements added here.Nan Hua honestly is one of my favorite patroganist. she got brains , she is smart , kind and cute with her thoughts too. ML I don't have much opinion yet , calm ,cool , collected, smiling tiger. He pass as a classic smiling villian for ppl he hate .
The story is enjoyable, but it lacks attention to detail. I'm at chapter 90 and still don't know the main character's appearance or height, which makes it difficult to visualize the scenes in my mind as a reader.Additionally, the pacing of the day is poorly organized, as there's no time allocated for sleep, making it seem secondary and unimportant.The power balance remains unclear. It would have been better to clarify the initial stages of the protagonist's journey rather than leaving it ambiguous for the readers, especially since it's hard to accept that a child between the ages of one and three can easily kill hundreds.As for the talents, they seem exaggerated. It appears that the author is leaning toward a more cosmic scale.
Oh my god what a story ! I just liked all the words in the story and if I want to say specifically it has so many English terms that I don't know? lol but that made me curious to know more English terms from your story and the description you gave in this story made me to think about the main characters and for last this is the best book I ever read !
Nice. Good luck i really like the development of the story which to have more chapters cant wait for the next update.. Really good story line
Omooo. More chapters please??????? Can't wait to read more. ???? Hopefully you can post more chapters everyday for us to enjoy ourselves and we won't be stingy on our votes to you. This work of yours is so fascinating, wonderful to read. Etc. Haha If I can rate you 5 stars everyday, why not?? ??
I must say this by far is one of the best books I've read on Webnovel, it deserves to be on the top books on here! I'm a critic and a perfectionist by nature, so it's hard for me to be impressed and I don't know how to fake liking anything, try this book you won't regret it! And vote vote vote!!! it's really good!
Oh, I love this book.The romance, perfect.Plot, perfect.Storyline, perfect.It's just a five star rated novel.Kudos to the author, for a job well done.
I'm loving the Biker Brothers. I think Jamie is the leader of the group, he seems to lead everyone. In fairness, every character is given equal opportunities to be featured.
holy sh!t.... is this really continuation strongest abandon son ( original one ) or is this ur own version ?.... ah i dun care... i'll read it as long as it's free bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
I love this story. The characters are very intriguing and I feel sucked in by the plot. I didn't come here expecting much but it really exceeded all my expectations and now it is one of my favorite stories. At times, the story is disturbing, at times the dark humor makes me chuckle but all in all its very very amazing and I can't wait to read more of it.