need more please. good stories. keep up the good work
You know a story is good when you just started reading that day and are at the last available chapter wondering how you finished so fast and what is the release schedule.
What a story. it is very captivating and engaging. everything from the transitions The author uses to the imagery they invoke. It is wonderful. i quickly fell in love with the characters (No Spoilers) and the story. please continue to write. it is def staying in my collections.
This was actually really terrible.....
Very disappointed, it could've been executed a lot better.
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SoU: 5*
Translation Quality: 5* - readable
Story development: As the sypnosis already told, the mc is reborn as a cultist and has a system that enables him to travel through dimensions/words like the Diablo game.
He gets missions and side missions with rewards and penalties.
He also three different abilities from his summon but the only one that I saw and can remember is that he can get 'soulstones' that grants him the strength of the 'said character imprinted' on it. For example it's a saitama soulstone then he gets all the strength of saitama.
Of course the soulstone only have 5 usages. No time limit I guess until the battle is over.
Character design: The mc is a bit bland while the other characters have their own personalities, not rich but the difference is clear.
World background: Fantasy world with churches, gods, cultists and balalala.
Overall.... 4.2 for me.
The 'jumping into other other worlds' that are movies, series and games are a bit too much now. The novel 'Custom made demon king' was better in this aspect as it was really well done by the author, this novel on the other hand is a bit worse.
But it's still good, so I say give it a try,
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This is literally great at everything except CONSISTENCY. It has an interesting tier and cultivation system and the mc is pretty much an cultivation maniac.
Nice concept, I like the way you use the pirate concept for your novel. Though I think will be more to understand. Character design is also very considerate.
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I like your story, it is interesting. There are two chapters so it is hard for me to decide the pacing. Overall this story is good. I like it