this gives me somuch dashavu I swear I read it before but it was the uther way around where the Mc was female with a male name and the mom was poisoned with a memory Thang that the Mc fixed
All I can imagine are strong enemies being like: "Death Ray!!!!"
And then Lu like: "Do you want some soup, sir? It's free of charge!"
hahaha
Very nice to see Er Gen new novel, but it is saddening to see how webnovel divides the chapters in two or three parts, just in this case the chapter 19 corresponds with 10 in raws.
Anyone expecting an MC going on an journey where the mc's only love is his sword? Woo**, you won't find any love here. You will, however, despite the authors protest, find a lot of kinship! The mc will turn into an self-righteous piece of sh*t by chapter 134, somehow understanding right and wrong and abandoning all his understanding of the world to pursue an ideal world which can only exist in his heart. Yes, the author actually justifies his actions by blatantly saying the world has to be clean for him to feel at peace. Arrrgh, the mc had such a good premise and the author was still deciding where to take the story before chapter 130~ and i have to say i'm sorely disapointed. I believe the author has experienced some unfairness in the period he wrote these chapters and therefor just went with it. But.. yeah. What really buggles me is that the author had the audacity to name this sh*tty way of thinking some grand name. Fjfbfnfnkf i'm speechless.
Still giving great score because the story IS well thought out, character development is good and one of the villains had more than 2 dimensional thinking as of chap 130~, so thats great! Unfortunately the mc's thoughts don't link up well with mine and i get mad whenever i hear his thoughts, so i'm dropping it. Happy reading!
It started decent. Maybe a little funny in the way the reincarnation happens. I didn't think it was truly great, but it was enjoyable. Then the main char started using abilities he should have no way of using. Main chars started dying and getting resurrected by even more op people. Getting thrown to other dimensions randomly... Splits of the MCs soul getting born... Over all it became weird, wtf, and cringey in the way everything happened just because the author said so. Beyond even excessive plot armor. Too much...
It started good though :/
I think the story is cool and the development is cool, I hope the author keeps updating.
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if you want to write a story you must use punctuation. Otherwise it's essentially unreadable.
in your head, as you write it, it probably makes sense. but to the reader, it's chaos.
please more more more
i like the story very mutch
Really interesting, I like the time skip that way we can move on to the important things as a mage and the future. The novel in itself is really nice. Would love to know more about the world background. No big grammar mistakes. I recommend this novel.
Read it a good novel that has some face spalling but not a look, and you can bear with it, so read and enjoy and leave and review and give your opinions to improve[img=recommend] the story
5 stars for being unique in terms of using the Indian cultural settings which is rich in culture and history, instead of the usual xianxia/wuxia in eastern fantasy.
Great Novel...
I realy like it...
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