Gotta say I really enjoy the novel so far! I think it has lots of potential especially if the author keeps up and gets a more regular release schedule. I think if this novel breaks 300 chapters more people will be flocking to support it.
only read first chapter, like half of it. seems to be ok. probably gonna like the concept, but the writing/gramar killed my eagerness to read.
or i am just not ready to read. very possible. will try again at a later date.
I got addicted to this book. The storyline is great. You may notice some punctuation mistakes. I haven't found any, though. He took a story that was really good to meh and made it into me starving for more. I did contact the author so that he would update it, and I'll see if updates happen more frequently.
I liked this story.. Please continue to write them!!! What i like from this novel is:
1. The minecraft portal and the items that you could by from the shop. It's literally all thing that existed inside real world, games, movies and even anime.
2. When you can't upload, you said it first. Not like other novels, who suddenly didn't upload.
Well.. in other words, you did a great job! (P.S. could you add some potions from Harry Potter too?)
Por acaso está novel foi traduzida no Google tradutor?
Apenas li os três primeiros capítulos, se houver alguma melhora na qualidade eu atualizo está review
I think it has a great start. I couldn't help but find it has unique story line. the sentence making has some flows but i think you can overcome it by the time . And lastly I hope this story find a great future.
This is my first review, so here we go. I really like the idea of the story, but there are quite a few grammatical mistakes. I advise you to rewrite the chapters because your book has a lot of potential. By the way, the character of Thomas is quite annoying, literally, so I'd really like to see him eliminated or help find a new body for charles to get in upcoming chapters.
p.s this review is purely based on the first few chapter
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give it a try it's different from most of the average novel out there and it's good ( ch.83 )
over all its an amazing story though you mostly emphasize their romance here and there, it stagnated their character development??
The book is cool and nice ...Bring in more baby girl ❤️We will be waiting to read more from your end ?❤️
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