Thus is, bar none, one of my absolute favorite novels ever. And I do mean NOVEL, not webnovel because this is truly a novel of professional quality. I've reading this on RR until now but when I saw it here I just had to save it to my library and leave a review. Not only my current favorite genre (isekai/creation combo) but I absolutely love the MC, his character development, the other characters and the "world" itself (haha) are so alive, full and most importantly, at least for me, it has a clear and stable plot and even when the direction changes it feels natural, like it was planned by the author from the beginning. This may end up being the first "webnovel" I buy a physical copy of to keep in my actual library. Please NEVER drop this novel author and see it through to the end! Your loyal and dedicated readers will be extremely depressed otherwise ❤️
Interesting story with interesting character
pls fix the translation, especially the pronouns, and tge cultivation realms Im confused about the emperor realm#Webnovel@
I'm about to start reading the book, hope it will be intriguing and interesting. I'll come back to give it a better rating when I'm done.
Good grammar, a rather interesting premise and an atypical power system and a world that is in the same vein, not much else to say, it's a solid read.
So starting from the prologue which is captivating and well written, this book is worth every hype. Jack remains my favorite character and hoping to read more of this book, but so far, I LOVE IT! This is a good book
This book is truly intriguing enough to leave all other novels on standby and read this one only
== Chapter four review, may be changed at the future===First for all. Everytime I looked at the female lead book. It will always be likeROMANCECEOWEREFOLFVAMPIREMAFIAbleh! that's too mainstream!but Zehel had proved that she could mix Mafia with the genre that the male lead liked most, Reincarnation.Writing style aside, not going to lie. It's like having Iphone 12 quality with Xiaomi's price! I liked that a lot.at the end. I can say, this novel is deserved a lot more attention!
The novel is interesting so far, the FL is cute and funny, I love that she has so many family members who love and spoil her, especially her adopted father. It’s just that in some parts of the novel it feels like it was just cut off and those events don’t actually have like a ending scene, im not sure how to exactly explain it. For example, when later FL meets one of her senior brothers again at celebration/party event that his family was planning for him and there after solving a issue that one of the characters who was trying to cause for FL, the senior brother grandfather end up being unconcious cause he was taking one of these suspicious medicine that he had gotten then FL help treat & make medicine for the senior brother grandfather and said that he would soon wake up and then she caught the guy who was disputing those suspicious medicines for the big families, and that scene/event just end just like that there’s no like follow up on her going back to check the grandfather to see how he’s doing,there was just short mention about another country trying to cause trouble with them that’s why they want to get rid of those elders in those big families but there’s like no details about why they’re doing that, who was actually the leader behind it, etc. There’s also a few other scenes/events where it just get cut off without like an ending scene to it before going on to the next event in novel. I do love the FL and her adopted father and their relationship though. There’s also a few characters I don’t like and find them annoying though.The free trial chapters translation is pretty good but the moment you start reading the locked/paid chapters the translation quality actually starts decreasing. There’s constant gender mix up, characters names being switch/mistaken and in the latest chapter (I forgot the actual chapter but it was around maybe 280-290s or so) there’s like a repeat of a chapter and it’s also around in those chapters that there’s also repeated lines too, they didn’t check the chapters to double check to make sure there’s no mistakes before actually publishing the chapters.In every chapter or so there’s always a gender mistakes of the characters that’s constant in every chapters, and also the characters names being switch so you would really have to pay attention closely or re read that paragraph again to make sure which of the character they’re actually talking about.
i think review in this novel is rigged checking if author deletes it or not.filler....................................................................................................................................................
good story. i want to read more abcderghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz.looking forward of how good you are being an author. so far you got my taste.Review not less than 140
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