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First I'm good to say great work author, I really like the book title and the synopsis was captivating too, even though the book is still in it early stage, the chapters were well written and I can already tell that the book has great potential. so keep up the good work author, keep updating.
Very well Written, i.e collection of words are too much good ..guessing sequal of any story is one of the futuristic thinking keep it on Mr.santosh and publish in future many more stories/novels
just to be sure is it related to death guns in another world? because their are some characters with the same name im confused and don't really understand abouy that part can you tell me if it is or not thanks
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Nice story line and the author really has variety of ideas to share to the reading public. The author creativity and ways of telling the story enhances readers interest to read on and on. Very excellent author.
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Granted I only read 5 chapters so my review should be read skeptically. They just did not hook me in. The only big positive I noticed was the grammer was great and I did not see any errors. Which is always a great thing. The negatives for me was the plot is very cliche and overused. In my opinion martial spirit cultivation is my least favorite of the “systems”. And I just did not like how the plot was progressing it seemed very predictable. The book was “cringey” at times. I just did not want to continue reading the book. But who knows, I do think many people could find enjoyment in this book. Maybe even love it, but this book is just not for me.
So Book 1 is completed .......When will new chapters be updated(in this)..????(all fans are waiting).When when when when when when when when when when when .....update update
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I’m back again with another review~This story is great and although there are not a lot of chapters yet, I have faith in the writer (no pressure xD)One thing that kind of confused me at the beginning were the rankings. They tell us that the rankings are ‘A and up’ and that disoriented me a little. A and up? As in A B C D E F, with A being the lowest and F being the highest? I believe that is the case in this story. Btw this is super easy to get used to, so it doesn’t hinder your reading experience. It just confused me at first because it’s usually A B C D E F, with A as the highest rank and F as the lowest rank. Thank you for taking your precious time to write this, you have my vote.