LordRaven
this book is nonstop amazement it just sucked me in and I didn't want to let it go it just hit the right spot just endless Fascination I'm wanting to know just what would happen next I wasn't sure and I am definitely happy and excited to see where this will go in the future
the mc is gonna look like this( below) during the 2nd shinobi war withot the right-eye sword mark like kakashi ( maybe) and I am thinning of giving the mc the move"Nine Mask Svāhā" that Menma uses to fight Naruto and the Akatsuki in the movie "Naruto: road to ninja" comment if you like it.
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The problem is with the boring petty clichés, and the perverted petty character of the hero (Do the Chinese all think about girls and Lolita??!?), Doesn't force lead to domination, monopoly and occupation through cruelty, blood, and a cruel sword without mercy!? This is what we are looking for, real human characters, we don't want perverted Chinese characters and cartoons, I hope other readers will publish my comment in all the Chinese trivia novels, so that the officials can see them and make some changes, heroes of justice, bad guys, good guys, just childish words. We don't want such trivial words
Loved it ..... Well writtenStarting few chapters was alright while MC was behaving a ignorant for comic reliefBut gradually the story and MC's personality upgraded splendidly and MC portrayed an reliable and intelligent side. Gradually but speedingly reaching OP level.Will never regret reading this I m slowly unlocking the chapters using pass and I wish someday I could catch up with the normal updates
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At first, the story is admittedly a little confusing, but at the same time, it's interesting enough to make you want to understand more. Over the next chapters, everything starts getting clearer and you find out just how thought out the world-building is.
The grammar and writing quality, in general, is good, I had no problem understanding anything.
Looking forward to the next chapters!
I find this fun and interesting. Not many books have the Main focus more in the dream aspect of things. It’s fun. Interesting. Refreshing. I am giving it a 5 star for the author to keep writing.
I just don't know why the MC suddenly became a simp! The whole story went downhill as he started behaving like he is a rich daddy buying women!
The title of the novel and the story hardly matches and the story is very boring as it goes on. I had some expectations regarding this novel but I'm dropping this novel. It's not worth it!
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Not to my liking
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