LordRaven
If you are looking for a new book that is lyrical at times as well as philosophically challenging without pandering or becoming formulaic, this is it! I was vaguely reminded of House of Leaves by Danielewski, as I don’t recall being challenged like this since attempting to read that cult (now) classic.
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There are three kinds of people: 1. people who like this novel, 2. people who don't like this novel, and 3. people who only read this novel to kill the time (that's me)
Love the story and the way you describe the football matches, however the thing that made me drop was the extremely slow system leveling and the mc in general.I love emma tho, she’s great.
The author has good insight and this story is surely going to be a big hit. The character design is beautiful and the writing quality is very nice
bro your novel has great potential ,you must not drop this novel
A decent read, but filled with flaws. The world isn't well explained and none of the characters act like they're in danger. They casually acknowledge they've been transmigrated, but then act like they're living in a video game. Even when people die, they brush it off and casually chat bout it without a care for their situation. The MC also acts inconsistent. Half the time he's careful and methodical, but then he suddenly acts irrationally for the sake of plot. It gets annoying fast
Gamer world are always interesting to me?Love the writing quality of the Author, good thing to keep it simple and understandable ♥️♥️Although I'm looking forward to reading more of the world background and seeing the growth of the characters ?
just 5 star for the synopsis itself i laughed reading it a fresh air from this Chinese names .thanks author hope u have devlop your skills to perfection can't wait wait to read it but after my exams
I just found this novel 2 days ago and so far this is one of the best story I ever read. The characters are well delivered and the story itself is written in a nice way. Keep up the good work author-san.???
Wasted potential, the chapters are broken at 17. Webnovels indifferent incompetence really rubs me the wrong way especially since this was decent slice of life. Based off the novel itself (till CH 16) I’d give this a 2.75/5 but that does not matter because the chapters are broken.The novel itself is alright, I feel bad for it but I can’t in good faith give it a positive review, blame whoever uploaded the chapters. By default, 0/5
