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The writing is good, updates come often and the background makes sense, although some stuff is hard to understand.
What I dont like is firstly, the cliché of the arrogant young masters. I cant seem to escape it no matter what I do. Besides, Its not the Middle Ages anymore. They should be at least a little smart.
Thats probably the main reason I left this book. Whenever there are young masters involved, the clichés follow.
What a wonderful book this is. You can't help but get drawn in and connect with the characters. This book is very hard to stop reading because of the cliff hangers it has through out. Definitely one of the best reads so far
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The Book is consistent enough in grammar,(If you wouldn't take note about English depth) The pacing is great, The MC is quite humorous. The only thing I don't like is I find this book early where no little chapters just yet for now. So! BLUE BALLS!!
I've read the first few chapters and I got to tell you all that the high rating of this novel is not as high as the quality of the novel itself. This must be the author's first novel, so I don't blame him for it being so bad!! anyway, here are some tips to the author-
the mc has zero background and is supposed to five years old, yet sometimes he's smart and other times he's childish as ****.
the side character are not well written either.
there is no world building and we are introduced to the big shot characters in the first few chapters.
there are many other mistakes that I didn't mention that also need to be fixed, but I don't have the time to list them all.
I'll be honest to you author the story sacrificed character and world building to be a fast paced leveling and power ups the synopsis, prologue, and reason are all just tropes. the story is full of cliches which is not bad if used correctly but every character in your story are all 1 dimensional as I'm currently reading so to those who want to read this you need to turn off your brain to enjoy it think of the mc as you playing a character in a game not a character in a story.
Good book and good selection of characters. I am not a big fan of the systems novels but this... seems intriguing to me for some reasons... Keep up the work, Author!
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La novela solo va comenzando pero nuestra un estilo de escritura detallado en su narración, el protagonista muestra una personalidad cómica pero puede tomarse las cosas enserio cuando es necesario; hasta ahora la historia es interesante y mejora con forma mas avanza.