those i marked at 3 star is due to how few chapter so far, the story itself is interesting and at least the mc interactions with the demonic lady is quite entertaining. I'd recommend giving it a shot
The author's writing style is very entrancing as the MC is somewhat talking directly to the reader (or at least it's conveyed that way). It makes me feel like I'm in the setting with them, which a lot of authors fail to do. In terms of writing, their sentence structure could use some work, but it seems more like a language gap issue and it really isn't a problem.
The dialogue is very riveting and it doesn't allow me to stop. Knowing what all the characters are thinking and doing is so gratifying!
This is an excellent start and I can't wait to see where this is heading. Awesome job, Author-sama!
I'm confused about what this is supposed to be.
spoiler alert..
Why have our mc who is more than a billion years old. He got reincarnated with a system that makes him do wines.
In the first chapters, I felt that the story was going fast and I started to get into it but then when it came to the origin of frost wine it started to become weird.
The author started to locked possible ways to the mc become stronger, not only that but his explanation are odd and made it look stupid how he could cultivate to the 9th Saint rank in the first place.
The sense of the progression of the story felt odd because of the origin of frost wine, we were already introduced to a more expensive wine but then the system makes the mc work to get this cheaper one.
Furthermore in the story, the store is basically ignored by the mc, the system even gives him a mission that does not contribute anything to the store but to him.
His decisions are strange he doesn't want to interfere in the kingdom, but then he wants, but in chapters later he doesn't want, and then he fights a dragon and he rediscovers a hidden side of him, after that he decided that he was going to interfere. IT goes back and front.
Then he wants to create a sect, this is the chapter that I'm currently and i wonder to myself, Why the fu** is this called "The immortal's Wine Store" since chapter 10-13 nothing expensive appear in the board of the store. It's like the author had an idea he didn't like where it was going and kept changing and changing it.
absolutely loving this one so far, the author makes a great job in immersing the reader with his amazing world building skills as well as story telling.
the story flows smoothly without any sort of grammatical mistakes to be spotted.
as you read further and further youll fall in love with the lovely, cheerful, and well written interactions. but at the same time the book is not limited to one tone, it can be serious when it has to be, with intense scenes as well as exciting ones.
This novel is truly a breath of fresh air. It combines a real cultivation world and a virtual one interestingly. A hidden gem in my opinion. I hope more people could review and vote for this great novel ;) Keep up the good work author!
Raw title: 战神领主
Status: 1375 Chapters (Completed)
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One of the few video game reincarnation storiea where the mc is a real mage abd not a close combat mage. The mc is smart and is willing to do almost anything to gaing more power. The other characters aren’t dumb and you don’t see the typical young master antagonist in this story. I highly recommend it.
I don't know about other people but I had a bit of a hard time following at the beginning but I attribute that more to myself then your writing. Your description was vivid but dialog made me question weather an actual gamer would talk the way you wrote. Your style made it seem like they treated the game like the real world to much. Overall it was a decent read
Can you start posting on here again? I use webnovel more than scribblehub. Please????
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Yet another victim of the inscrutable synopsis. Look, Ji is a disgraced Imperial prince who also happens to be a transmigrator whose goldfinger activated too late for him to stop the scheme that got him locked up in a library with nothing but Buddhist sutras to read. ONLY! His goldfinger's skill is to assimilate whatever he reads and immediately make him a master of whatever skill generates. Now, it's up to him to defend his only blood sibling and overturn the Heavens (and his neglectful father) to take his rightful place as ruler of all!
I read this novel to it raws ...this novel has good comedy element and far appart from clishe xanxia novels...this novel is all about face value so dont think arrogant nature from mc ...here mc not op from begning but whole world think is op due to its face value..this is very addicting and refreshing
If you want to read mtl
Go to lnmtl(My senior brother is ordinary)
Good mtl and readable and understable
Here i would comment on translation ...which is good and clear but need more work on editing
The storyline is quite unique and it immediately piqued my mind. Though generally I don't prefer this genre but this novel changed my views completely. The story development is also quite good and at pace.
Keep your hard work on! Good luck!