The Immortal's Wine Store

It said Wine Store??? Now MC has started to do the Cooking and Refining Pills also?? That's completely different from what it initially started from.

As of Chapter 49

Writing Quality: 5/5
No visible mistakes were seen. (My english might not be the best so take it with a pinch of salt all you grammer nazis)

Story Development: 5/5
A relatively light hearted story in my own opinion. This story has a theme seen by most light novel readers. However, the light heartedness of the story carries teally nicely despite there being a little gore in some areas. A relatively easy read.

Character Design: 3/5
A typical aloof MC. There is nothing out of the ordinary about the MC so far. However, the MC stays true to his role and does not do anything out of character thus far. (OP and aloof MC). Not much is seen in the side characters as there is little to no depth in them. They feel very surface level (if you get what i mean).

Updating Stability: 5/5
I jist binge all 48 chapters so i am assuming that this novel has daily releases.

World Background: 3/5
A typical chinese fantasy theme as a world background. Nothing outstanding seen so far.

Overall: 4.2/5
I would consider this a novel to pick up and run with. There seems to be alot of potential in this novel. However, this novel is fairly light hearted and not for those who enjoy grimdark. This novel can be considered more of a easy read type novel. The main issue with this novel (why it has a low score) is due to the lack of chapters which will be solved in the future.  Will do a future review once there are more chapters

I was really sad when this book went hiatus and I waited for the original author to pick it up again. Good thing someone decided to approach the original author.

I have nothing else to say about the book. It's great and the MC is so OP and badass.

This is Malignant, the rewriter of this book. This book was originally the work of Condemned, but due to certain reasons, he placed the book on hiatus. Now, I got his permission to continue writing this craft.

Why did I rate it so low? It's not because the book is subpar or mediocre, but because I want the book to start at the very bottom. Only you, the readers will tell the quality of this book. Of course, I hope that before you guys decide to write a review, you will take time to read more than ten chaps at the very least.

Anyway, I will leave this review here to indicate the new start of this craft.

I enjoy reading this book I can't wait for the next chapter every time I finish the one that just came out there isn't any big grudges or fight scenes all the time but the book itself is interesting enough that it doesn't need to rely on that to keep its readers. I didn't have much hope for the book when I first started reading it as I thought that making wine would be boring and I would end up dropping the book but next thing I knew my coins were flying away and I had no more chapters to read because I was hooked into the story so thank you author for this amazing book.

I love this novel, for some reason I feel at ease when I'm reading, it's a really strange feeling but when I read this novel all the stress or everything that I can usually feel in other LN isn't present, it's just calming and I want to congratulate and thank the author for this.

Well, let's speak about the novel itself, first there aren't that many if any fault in the language. The way the author use the words is very pleasing and not repetitve. The phrasing is good and I must say that it is more and more difficult to find novel with this quality.

Then about the updating stability, as you can see, the author is uploading 14 chapters / week, which is why I think he deserves 5 stars. The chapters are not that long but the writing quality make me feel that the author spend much time working on his novel.

The world background is especially good here, we have some lead about the origin of the system but not all the fact, the world is structured, there is no incoherence and everything is clear, well thought, and nit over exaggerated. The universe described is plausible. And all of this lead to a good story development.

Some might think that the author is too quick with the beginning but I think that it is a strength of this novel, it skipped the boring part and always show what is really interesting (I won't hide the fact that I would enjoy if the author decided to spend a little bit more time on each part because I really enjoy reading). If the author can continue this speed or slow down a little bit it would be perfect I think.

The story itself is well built, it's coherent, the goal of the MC is clear and logic and ghe way he acts and how the story evolve is at the same time a little bit obvious (if you spent the last few years reading novels you will be able to see what's coming in the few next chapters) but also surprising (the way the author make the MC acts is different but coherent, logic and intelligent).

And the good world background and story development is completed by the characters, the MC and first plan characters are all interesting and I hope they can progress along the MC so that they are not forgotten like in a lot of novel because each of them has a personality which is really cool. The MC development is particularly good, he is not oblivious and his stubbornness is justified but it doesn't stop him from evolving and developing feelings.

The second plan character are less developed (which is logic) but they are not stupid or boring, they blend perfectly in the story.

As for the characters that only appear occasionally they are qualified by something that make you recognize them even after long time not seeing them and they add rythm and consistency to the story.

For the characters that only appeared once they are either here to make the story progress or for the comic relief.

All in all a rare jewel on this app, worth reading, worth following.

I would like to congrat and thank the author for this story.

Keep up the good work, it's really good.