SpiritImmortalMvH
I enjoyed the novel so far. It's really worth a read. Hope u enjoy too
Hi author here, till chapter 9 I will try to lay down the foundation for mc and after that I will start to develop character and world.
Please try and bear with the writing.
As for Indian characters, i am an indian and would like to promote the culture of India( I really dont have much knowledge of chinese culture)
thank you, and appreciate you guy's viewership.
New author who could use a little bit of work on his English at times, but that being said it's better than 99% of the stuff on this site already!
The majority of the time the author follows a logical progression, and shows the motivations for the characters actions in a way that makes sense and is engaging.
I think this author has a lot of potential, and if he had a professional editor on hand this novel would be almost publishable!
Keep on writing, keep on practicing, keep on doing your thing!
As a piece of advice, you might want to start distancing yourself from readers comments. As your novel gets more and more popular you will eventually attract some trolls, and some very loud negative voices from idiots who don't know what a proper story is, and couldn't write one to save their lives. Make sure not to let them discourage you!
Yo can you please provide the raw link please????
This novel reminds me of The Greatest Showman so, I'm hooked.
Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaassseeeeee.
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It might not be for everyone, but I enjoy these types of overpowered novels. I'd like to see how the MC gets through his predicament, so I hope they'll continue translating the story.
This is a great novel. If your expecting anything serious then don't read it though because you won't get what you're looking for. It's one of the funniest things I've read in a while.
The grammar is perfect.the work epic.and you are legendary dear author
Good Story Bruh I just want to say to keep going to do more chapters Bruh...
B R U H . . .
Seems like a dark fantasy, sing me up. Also there's not much choice this week unless you're a romance lover. That's double the motivation to vote for this novel.
Basically, this is what would “realistically” happen if weebs were summoned to a magic world.
content of the novel is nice. suspicious contention and understood. i like the way writer tried to present the theme. best of luck for your participations
