how many chapters do this story have?
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really good work, though it only has 10 chapters
To me, as long as a book I've read has not gave me the thought of "I'm bored" it is a good book to me :)
Title sounds promising.
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it was a good story but it got worse and worse midway.. then after about 800 chapters i stopped reading... I can't take it anymore.. from a normal person to superman like.. then to a godlike... the whole story change... GARBAGE! don't read this.. you'll just be disappointed!
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Raw link plz
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great idea ruined by the simple fact the mc keeps trying to be s mage and not a cultivator poorly executed ides...I love the whole mage being reborn into a cultivation world and being a cultivator but being a mage in a cultivation world is just plain dumb and stupid
This was certainly something……. There were so many different issues. To list one of them. Author or translator was too lazy to figure out how western names are. They should have never translated the names. The naming sense is ridiculous “white Vivian”. Also this story is pretty confusing and the way people talk is extremely weird. This needs an editor.
from a first look, it's an extremely familiar overall worldscape (vr capsules, haptic feedback for training purposes, time dilation, a weak MC who flukes out, etc), however the author fleshed those out in rather intriguing ways, the only downside, I'm guessing the author isn't confident in English and for some reason doesn't use any grammar or spellchecker features, which I can almost guarantee will break any immersion the intrigue built up... that said, I was hooked until 150 and that's only because the author clearly and obviously hasn't realised that's an earlier chapter... which worries me because people were reading it before me and apparently they didn't notice...
Good novel good story good work and good Quality
It's a nice story and I am already hooked. I love the storyline, please give more chapters.....Please don't middle drop it.I want to follow this book this the end............All the best
dropping the translation quality like this after the free trial is just a scam, trying to trick some people into batch unlocking chapters without noticing.