There is not much to say to my own book so thanks for reading my book and this senseless comment. İf you found a mistake or want to give your advice, that would be great for me. This is my first writing a book/novel so every help counted
Simply unreadable.
I wanted to try this out, but it’s almost as if the author put a bunch high school-level words into a randomizer and spread them throughout his sentences in order to make his writing seem more chic.
There are commas in the middle of a phrase, comma splices everywhere, run-on sentences, non-sensical sentences, etc... You name it, this author has it. It’s almost as if this novel was written for companies to use for their interview examinations for incoming editors.
Let’s not even go over the chuunibyou plot and naming.
You want to try this novel? Go ahead. But don’t say you weren’t warned.
This is not the type of book I would generally be reading. Nonetheless, this started out really well, and the current amount of chapters is not sufficient to leave a proper review. The grammar requires correction at parts. Good luck!
Read reviews that was written on the novels opening page. The first chapter reads in chronological order as a spy novel should. The first chapter is just a little bit long and could be broken up into more than just the one. Other than that, very well writing with suspense included
I don't want to be shameless. To be honest, I'm only writing this for fun and forging my English. If you have problems with it, I don't care. If you don't like it, then don't, no one is forcing you to read it. If you want to trash talk my novel, spare me from that.
Goodluck at reading this crappy novel.
Looking for a story to calm your nerves with? Here it is. Read up and be happy. The writer did a good job here am am recommending him to everyone
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I struggled with this one... didn't quite enjoy it and well for me at least it's pretty boring. Usually for me what makes a great novel stand out is characters first, comedy and action second and great plot third and well here I got tired of the mc real quick, there's no real action or great comedy and for the plot? Well I haven't gotten that far yet before dropping it. You may like it so feel free to try it but I really don't.