It's actualy kinda good novel but MC is total not gonna kill anyone beta I hope his enemies will come back and viciously slaughter his friends and family why he screams I'm beta and won't kill anyone
At 10 chapters, looks like great character building slowly endorsing him into combat sports. Right now it's just boxing but if we see different martial arts like muay Thai, ju jitsu, that would make the novel whole lot complete. Still it's definitely a novel I am very much going to be reading in the future. I will be saying to author to keep it up.it is brilliant and I cannot wait to read more of it.
Good book so far but the names of the spirit beast Are so long for no reason.
The story is generic, and the characters are made from cardboard. The MC also seems slow.
The "Golden finger" - the System, is almost superfluous, and its exact use is blurred.
The grammar is okayish, even with the few errors here and there, but all characters' names are Western. It's strange and breaks immersion to have these kinds of names in an Eastern novel.
It might be worth reading for some people, but there are heaps of better stories in the same genre.
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AMAZING !! I just read two chapters and I was in !! The plot is very intriguing and engaging. Really loved the progression of the story !!
Keep up the work !
I am eagerly waiting for upcoming chapters !!
I didn't really know what to expect cause this is my first action book. But the writer kept me captured and looking forward to the next chapter!!! I am so excited. P.S EDWARD MUST DIE!!!
The story is awesome the best part is that characters don't seen one dimensional..Most fanfic have side characters that are written as if they live for the MC's sake...Over all great writing quality...Story development is great...Update stability character design are awesome as well....
I mean, I think it's pretty good, but I'm very biased. Still, if given the chance, might as well advertise it myself. It's a slow burn, and he doesn't get OP quick, nor do I know if he ever will. It's not a typical power-fantasy. You probably won't like every single plot development, because taste differs. There are more lighthearted, and also darker parts.
I, as an author, would recommend you read all of it. The story gets better with every chapter, or so I like to think, as the world and cast expands, but if you really can't stand the writing, that's fine as well.
In any case, I hope you decide to give my story a try, and can see past it's flaws.
The writing quality is abysmal to the point where I have read machine translations that made more sense. The story seems to be all over the place and characters are quite bland the author desperately needs someone to edit past chapters.
Original i read here that was refreshing and new, glad to see that its back to being updated here. I dont use webnovel that much but i had to say, epic work bro. As an african i appreciate the authenticity and entertainment factor in this
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