the story is great. I love your style of writing. I guarantee that this will be an amazing book. keep on updating to garner more readers! overall this is amazing..
This is a very wonderful realistic novel that I'm sure many can relate to, especially if they have things to relate to. The novel is written in the present tense which I found very strange and confusing since they are supposed to be written in the past tense. Disregarding that, the novel is a hidden gem with lots and lots of potential. Beautiful work [img=recommend]
well i did not read any thing ..
but to support your future novels.
my score .. 5.0
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A unique story line and great character design. the development of how the story goes kept getting better and better. recommend
This novel is one of the few good ones out there. I have been following it for quite a long time and I have to say although there is mistake in grammar here and there it still puts the point forward. I saw that few of the authors of other novel are Saying he copied their novels and I don't really see where though, if its just the lewd scenes that's although kinda bad but its not something irredeemable. So author-san really love your novel don't worry about those people and continue your work.
Sounds interesting looking forward to a weird type of apocalyptic shop novel. ..............................................................
Good.Read it.
terrorism terrorist bloody peaceful inbred slimy imbecile git hedonist sister f**k** oprresor religion based on war cruelty cruel people so called peaceful in name only
Stolen translation, but more importantly, wasnt that good (゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)(゜∀。)
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Beginning was a bit rough, it seems you are getting better at writing. Less run-ons and camma errors. I like the charcter ideas, but at the beginning you were going everywhere. Now it seems more solid, I would like to read more.
So far the book is good and what I like the most is how the main character is creating his own world even thought it’s only 6 chapters in I will keep reading for now but keep it up author...;)