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THe Translation didNt come out quite right. And soMe times it Felt like the story just SKipped a beat or decided we Had to know something really important but bot That bad.
its a really good book and it deserves to be recognised , i really like the setting as a vrmmorpg , gives those sword art online vibes , personally i like it
The Synopsis had me hooked even before I even started reading the actual novel. I think it's such an amazing story and I'd definitely recommend this Novel to others! The world you've created is amazing and your characters are great! Keep it up author, and good luck!
At first I was a bit apprehensive towards the novel. The MC starts out fat and is a loser, but over time he really does grow into a great guy that pulls through despite everything. The author does a great job of writing funny moments as well as bringing the serious times when they need to.
The writing of the novel improves by a lot as it goes on, starting about average for this site but improving to what is currently chapter 98. The subtleties and detail that is explained makes me feel like I'm seeing it while I read it.
5/5. I'm looking forward to reading more!
this is bad that's depressing.this is pure garbage really .the backgroud is good but the author is a racist bast*** and the way the story evolve is just horrible.
its a very enjoyable read. Sure, the characters seem rather shallow but then again there straightforward and that creates a great level of understanding. At the end of the day this is a slice-of-life light novel, not a shakspearan classic so honestly most people don't need complex plots and characters in these they need enjoyment.
Wonderful! The best game or litrpg novel I've read in ages.............Pacing is brilliant. Character development is really good, I have a very clear image of the characters and their personality. World background is hidden on purpose, its part of the mystery and is revealed slowly with chapter progression.............The author turns standard tropes of classic fantasy races on their head. It's a very unique reading experience as he completely destroys the preconceived image of things. ............The author uses the adult content as a device to tell the story and its inkeeping with the characters. There's no forcing which is refreshing.............I highly recommend you give it a try. Its better than most of the litrpg ive read on amazon.
The writing is quit good. Story development so far is slower than a turtle.Since the development is so slow we dont know that much about the mc, but he used his phone, which is supposed to be his cheat according to the synopsis, 1 time in the first 18 years. That brings some questions for me...The updates are a joke since it is only in the trial phase.The world setting is ok I guess, though I'm still confused how some things work. The biggest minus is the really slow passed writing so far. I hope it picks up some momentum.
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Don’t waste your time on this novel. Right from chapter 8 the mc became brain dead. Despite transmigrating and living in this world for 5 years he just acts like he just got transmigrated and doing things like a noobie. I thought this novel would be different from the others but it is indeed worse because it makes you think it’s different but later on looks at you like a fool. Hope this doesn’t get picked and other novels with better potential does.
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