This is identical to Underworld Gamers.
Alright i read 20 chapters in, and yeah its quite solid especially with the author clarifying its their first rodeo i believe. Now its not without its faults, lets get the big hurdle out of the way, the main character is a big mary sue. Not really a spoiler as around 18 chapters in its revealed hes had "sword and gun training" and that he was " a genius" who quit because he found it boring. Not to mention his perfect figure and attractive features the first chapter in. Look, you can enjoy this for what it is especially when there is a lot worst, there are no overbearing cliches here. Well aside from Mr Perfect MC. He does struggle but at a superficial level. Also minor gripe, his actions and thoughts being somewhat contradictory? He thinks others are a burden while risking his hide for an inhaler, that isnt to say human beings aren't flexible and contradictory in nature. So thats not really a major issue but i felt it should atleast be addressed. OH, lets talk about the only female 20 chapters in who's an office worker who coincidentally is a kendo three time championship who also coincidentally has a kantana sword becuase coincidentally it was her first day on the job... Idk it could happen but very unlikely and it just had me rolling my eyes E N ways thats about it. Have a good one.
Read up to 38 so far. I like it so far as a whole, but something about the writing style bothers me. I either don't know what the problem is or can't put it in words. Will keep reading.
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So i felt like reading some isekai and stumbled upon this... My rating overall is about 3.8The writing quality i wont comment on because it feels okay to me and even if there are mistakes i don't think it's a big deal either way.Story-wise there isn't anything too far from what we have seen in these kind of stories but personally i dislike the MC. So this is where my rant to the author starts.He just seems completely strange to me...like TOO POLITE for one, i mean i get it everyone has manners and such but this guy just feels over the top for me, sometimes a few of his thoughts he keeps to himself would have been better said out loud to help develop the story along with his character..Speaking of which his interaction with women, it's obvious this is a harem route but why does this MC lack so much backbone? Even the slightest of touches from the teasing Dog Girl has him flustered like he has never interacted with women his entire life mind you this should be someone that is at least around 17-20 years old since he is doing job hunting in his previous life. I'll just assume the author is doing it for comedy i guess...Last but not least does this guy think for himself? I mean i get it at the start where he was just learning and all that but for someone that comes from our world with all these anime and movies you're telling me this guy never once thought about experimenting with his magic? Someone had to tell him to try fusing for him to do it? He summoned familiar's that seem to be thousand of years old but never considered asking them for advice on magic from their experience? This guy just feels like a clueless side character most times that hold up a sign that say "I'm the MC" every now and then. Also author you should flesh out his harem some more because even reading this over the few days sometimes i'm barely remembering who is who, then again i assume you were probably waiting for later to have some 'special moments' with the MC to flesh them out some more.Either way i'm still following along...this is just my thoughts good luck on the story.
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Trash translation. Average repetitive novel. Shameless copying if names and elements from other novels.CN authors remind me of authors during the Shakespeare Era when copyright didn’t exist and authors would just steal content from each each other.
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So I am here trying to give myself a review after reading up to the latest chapter. Let's start first with the writing quality, I'm very well aware of how the story's transition turned out pretty decent. The way the author writes the story is pretty clean and concise, enough for the readers to immediately hook up and immersed in the story without any hurdles. I think this is the greatest benefit you get away with every game system novel. With this kind of strength in your hands, you can reveal an adequate amount of show-not-tell and vice versa. The Updates have been pretty consistent, as I can see with the publishing dates of the chapter, that's even more than one. That's more than what I can ask for. Please keep it up.The story development: I'd say that I love the premise especially the "Government". Whether we like it or not, it's always some shady business over there. It's actually decent and not a far-fetched idea. This kind of administration will always F up some characters and this moves me to the next question.With the character design, we can see the glimpse of Alex, despite his beliefs of the heroes, found himself in a predicament and only to be shattered by the dark side of it. But his strong sense of justice had what kept him from moving forward. I pray that he'll because the superhero where today's youth had lost hope on believing one.With the world background, this is just the beginning and its kind of understandable that world-building is tedious and takes time to form. We just witnessed how Alex is transported to another world after the verge of death. Right now, I'm just seeing the bud that had just germinated. I'm very optimistic that it'll grow as abundant as the flora in the garden of Eden.Keep it up! I hope for the very best in this WPC!