I like most of the thing in this novel except the tortoise ? speed of update. It’s been 9 days since the last update. Very disappointing
read it till end or you will regret it all your life.masterpiece it is!! there may be some dissatisfaction regarding the behavior of people but it is reaally a good novel.
This Book has piqued my Curiosity while scrolling and decided to give it a try.After reading all currently available chapters I found out...
I love this novel, it is a great read. However I would like to offer some feedback. It is a bit too slow almost 80 chapters and we still haven't seen much yet and almost no fights. I like the MC and the story but in my opinion you should speed up the plot a bit you don't have to do anything drastic but simply increase the speed a bit. Hope this helps❤
Im gonna level, the intro on this story... isnt great.
The pace is great (rare for a WN, so good job) and the characters have a nice foundation; but I cant believe it, for an disaster novel it lacks authenticity. There are so many cases where common sense flies out the window and the established world rules are disregarded (any scene involving the elevator is just a big box of stupid).
Its like Im reading a first draft of an inexprinced author; this being a WN I’m probably not wrong. A second draft or editor would improve things drastically on this front, but its not unreadable by even by WN standards. Just dont think to hard about the technical side of the world building.
Beyond that Theres...
Good
The premise is interesting,
the tension is present,
and it has great growth potential for both the story and author.
Bad
A bit heavyhanded with the early messages, could have been done in a more natural way,
lots of telling but little showing (chapter 4/5 is mostly just infodumps),
The characters all start off as stupid. The MC in particular leaps past dense and dashes for the label of braindead. Thats ignoring his moral compass and naivr begining.
Its far from a masterpiece on an execution basis; but the author has enough ideas to make it an interesting, if occasionaly infurating, ride.
wonderful but I am poor
English isnt my first language. The novel is pretty good, mc is very interesting. Please dont turn this into harem, many author failed to make a good harem.
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I thought this is Cardcaptor sakura(This sakura is more useful than Naruto's) fanfic.......................................................... ...................................................................................
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I'm enjoying this a great deal so far. Takes me back to when I just started reading King of Gods. Not really surprising seeing as it's the same author and all. It's mainly about body cultivation so far, I'm sure that's going to change down the line, but I kind of hope it doesn't. We will see........
If you enjoyed King of Gods you'll enjoy this, unless you come to find out you outgrew it and your pallet has changed, in which case disregard my prior statement, and read it anyway.
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