The only other novel I can think of that's similar to this is sword of the dawnbreaker, the MC is a declining clan's first ancestor that miraculously revived but the similarities stop there. It seems the revival of the ancestor in this story will happen at a much slower pace, in 60 chapters a month passed and he can only wiggle 2 fingers and open and close his eyes. The MC in this story has a cheat system and is pretty OP even when he's not fully revived so I'm guessing he won't be until stronger beings are introduced whenever that will be. So far there's hints of possible stronger monsters in forbidden zones and a spacecraft that crashed landed in the ocean full of otherworldly materials and cultivations.
One message I picked up from this story so far is no good woman exist, only 2 faced heartless wh
A good read and a very likeable Mc. Since the author is new it makes it even more interesting. Please continue with more chapters as I am really liking it so far.
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A well done MMORPG concept. Author knows their stuff, I'm guessing that they have been playing games for years to no end. The details and basic knowledge are presented well enough for me to grasp the experience like I'm playing the game myself. This is coming from someone who is ten chapters in, so I don't know how the story will progress in the future. I like these types of stories, so there's a high chance that I will be watching out for future updates. Keep up the good work, author!
I really love this story, i ve read all the available chapters ( free ones), it made me cry it made me laugh, honestly it is really good, only the first few chapters till the story really starts are, well they re good, just not as good as the later chapters
Alright so to the review
Writing quality
Now, i really love how author wrote his story, a few grammar mistakes here and there (between he and she) but you can understand nonethless if you pay attention, but still 5 stars for the way he wrote it
Story development
Now in the first chapters till the story starts up, it s well, quite average, but after that i had no words, like i know i sound biased but this is my honest opinion, for the 73 chapters that i read at the end i had no words, it s so good, well beside in the middle of the "earth" part, that was a bit boring to me, but still 5 stars as i loved it
Character design
Now, i love the main character, the character development of him is done so so good that u don t realise till u read chapter 73,or maybe u do but you don t pay attention, just when u read chapter 73 and be like wow wtf, like srsly
I also like his big sister and friends, although not much character development over there, maybe his big sis, but it cannot compare to the main character, at all, at least my opinion, but i didn t read a story that made me like it so much so imma still give it 5 stars
Update stability
I can t comment on this, because i didn t finish the story as i read only the free chapters, but like, this is a biased vote here, but u can just ignore as it can be as wrong as it can be right, so 5 stars, only because i really love the story overall,
World background
Now i was really immersed in the story that i didn t really pay that much attention to actually write a review about it like, i know where the story happens, where they are everytime, but i can t write a detail review about it, but yeah as above, i still give 5 stars, honestly the background was enough for me, i understood everything that was going on.
I know the review is quite biased as i really loved it, but i know now that not everyone will that s for certain, so if someone reads my review, take that in mind too, always don t have high expectations as u would really enjoy it more, i mean i avoided this novel when i first saw it just because i thought it s some normal cultivation cliche and look at me now
I don't think this is a terrible idea, and the story development is okay. However, I can't get past the fact that the grammar in this story isn't very well developed. I know not every author can hire a proofreader for every chapter, but this webnovel from the start honestly feels a little rushed on the author's part. If you're the type of person that's okay with some bad grammar, this could be an okay story. I just can't focus on the story when my immersion is being constantly broken by present and past tense switching around, when in narration only past tense should be used unless referring to a character asking himself a question about his/her future. I really feel like the idea for this webnovel is great, but when the other reviews say it is childish, that's probably because it feels like something a teenager might have written at times.
raw name please
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The plotline of the story of interesting. There were a few errors that need tweaking. At first, I wasn't sure who the protagonist was, but as I went on I got a clear understanding. All in all, the external conflict of the story had me continuing to the next chapter. I'm sure when it's polished, it'll be an amazing novel.
Please continue your novel. Your novel has potential that even in just chapter 2 im already invested in the story. Looking forward to your chapters!
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Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.