Another small pet peeve I have is the usage of vocabulary. Vocab could be a very minor thing for some, but for this instance it bothered me a lot. It was the usage of the words "hot shot". It's a modern word the MC specifically uses in this fantasy setting to describe characters that have cheats and could be protagonists of other stories. He teaches this word to his disciples. Cool, nothing wrong with that, but then another character, completely unrelated to the MC, who has never interacted with the MC suddenly uses the word "hot shot" also to describe these characters. ???? When there is no cohesion of the world, even in something as minor as this, it breaks the immersion.
Author here, i put this here on hiatus preparing more chaps and planning the story but now ima go full throttle hehe. Hope you enjoy my work!
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Dear author,Thank you for a refreshing story and please update when you can. This lowly reader will be anticipating more stories from you. A start of a wonderful novel. Sincerely a lowly reader.
ceritanya keren dan unik enak dibaca dan mudah dipahami setiap tokoh yang main dalam cerita ini menggambarkan keadaan seperti di dunia nyata saja. keren
original review not much to say not worth reading better stuff out there missing information and bad grammar no point in bothering with it except for the zombie-themed violencelatest reviewa lot has changed in the three months since I posted my original review and I have to say the last 20 chapters (140-160) have reinvigorated the story and made it a lot more interesting. I gave the story another chance and after the first 10-20 chapters in it finally came out with a proper story which was the biggest problem it was facing. and with it being all zombies I was all in, however there was still the problem of grammar that we are facing even now I go into an in-depth rant about it here (https://***.webnovel.com/book/13995774106924005/King-of-Harem%3A-Beautiful-Ladies-Everywhere) on my other review of this authors other work but with more chapters came another problem, around 120 chapters in we were facing the possible problem that it would become repetitive however it was saved by the aforementioned twist in the latest 20 chapters which I will reframe from talking about for the sake of spoilers, I would recommend reading casually due to the aformentioned flaws
Boring.Just plain.The character is a regressor, and instantly becomes OP. Makes people accept him as their lord, gives them OP items. His cheat doesn't seem to have any cooldown or limits either, just insta-upgrade from normal to OP items or classes. MC has no background story or anything, just that he was someone who regressed and was a decent summoner in his last life. No character development at all, MC doesn't have much of a personality either. Also somehow all the "top talents" of the future are conveniently located near him, of course most of which are women. He forces people to accept the harsh truth that the apocalypse is now, and that the world now follows the laws of the jungle, he's not wrong, but the world was literally changed maybe a few hours ago and now he's enforcing jungle laws like it's his life, not surprising since he's a regressor, but annoying. In the end, this is a boring, gary-stu, insta-bs novel, I like apocalypse game like novels a lot, but this is just rubbish. Something that seemed like author shitted out because of some contract quota. Here's some real recommendations for apocalypse like novelsWorld's Apocalypse OnlineKill The Hero (not really apocalypse, but dungeons descend on earth)The Tutorial is too hardEveryone else is a returnee
Please, can you translate this work again ? I would be grateful. The story is quite different from what I thought it would be. Surely the rhytm is quite slow and there are a lot of descriptions, but I would love to know, in the end, who really is our MC ;)
Esta novela está mal, en el primer capítulo le robo la oportunidad a alguien más, cosa que no le debería importar, osea es soportable, lo que no es soportable es que el men se está beneficiando ya lo suficiente de saber las noticias del futuro y como si eso no bastará el autor le da un sistema que lo hace a un más op, también si eso le agregas que el tiene novia, osea ni siquiera tiene que buscarla eso significa que el es guapo, más eso también tenemos que la novia es rica en los dos sentidos, eso para mi ya deja un mal sabor de boca. Para concluir con mi crítica, les recomiendo la novela: 12 horas después o en inglés...pues no me acuerdo....en fin es esa novela coreana se muestra mejor el tema.
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While a good read, the translator releasing free chapters only rarely and focusing on premium chapters is going to stop most readers, which will cause the series to be dropped, which I find an unfortunate waste.