Je suis déjà là !J’avais peur que l’auteur arrêtait complètement l’histoire mais bon il avait fait ce qu’il jugeait nécessaire.En tout cas je vais prendre tout mon temps pour savourer l’histoire ?
In the eyes of the other nations, he was a time bomb.
This was an interesting read so far. We don't get a lot of campus drama, especially gender benders, in Webnovel. There are a lot to be improved, particularly in terms of characterization though, but it's an overall enjoyable read. If you're looking for a story different from the usual Webnovel trope, you can try this out.
Author is there romance and harem Personally I hate both of them,But it’s your book author and I love to See what you’ll do with it???????????????????
The writing is pretty good. A few minor mistakes, but nothing too serious. The pacing and flow of the story is enjoyable. We get a prologue chapter at the start that establishes a lot about the world and the following chapters do a good job at continuing this.
Not this kind of synopsis again... EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP DXP DXP SXKE EXP EXP
Great read in my opinion, I really love it but I wish it got updated more. May it continue going like this, it might be one of my new favorite novels!
Great novel, except that after chapter 138 its all duplicated pages or even pages from other novelsSo watch out for chapters beyond chapter 138, i hope the author fixes this FAST…
Simple story but what makes it a good read is the unveiling of the plot peel by peel. This is a old school format of novel writing in which you rarely find in this website like this.
The number of times that the words "envy, jealousy, activity (means sex), ass, breast," repeating each paragraph makes me crazy, it never always changes the same speech, always the same thing we know that the hero is good at sex we understood, we clearly understood after 100 chapter with the same thing develop a MC level power instead of stagnating everything, ****!
First off, it was actually a really good story for a while. He was op, but he didnt start with like the rinnegan or some other broken eye power. What he got was strong, but also versatile and used in a cool way. The downfall of the story is the female lead. The way she interacts with, becomes friends with, and partners with him is nonsensical. How is a 14 year old level 90+ have that much freedom? Realistically she would be a government slave or lab rat. The dialogue is just...forced and fake. Can you, author, really imagine two people in real life saying the things they said to each other outside the camp? And becoming his girlfriend just like that? For a battle hardened warrior, no matter the age, that was an immature and illogical thing to do. Also when she followed him, how does she have nothing better to do? She was base commander feom my understanding. Command positions involve 1 thing...paperwork, and she never does any? Unless that is how the school operates and it is completely independent from the government. If that was the case, the government was not nearly as oppressive as the mc thinks. Outside the character flaw that is the female lead, the mc is immature for someone with his childhood. Unless he is drunk on power nobody raised like that eould have the confidence to even dream of having a girl like the female lead. Sociological and Psychological conditioning would have made sure of that. Finally, some things in the world dont make sense, like hos a government issues mecha woth an AI in a world woth apparently nanotechnology relies on a code kept on a piece of paper in a professional pilot and solderis picket. Really? Overall though, it was still a great story derailed by poor exexution of the female lead. I would say work on making dialogue and character interactions less forced and plot driven, and more natural and character driven. Also, I would say reread your story and try to find things that dont add up like the mecha issue, I think you will find more than just that.
The only time I ever agreed with a rating on Webnovel, mines 3.8 while right now 3.9 book, for once the reviewers were honest, though itll get boosted later by spam.