I would like to give it more stars but after reading up to 100 chapters I can not. The writing is great and I think the story had great potential but the MC kills the story. He is a college student that in the game he is a complete idiot or has no common sense on anything. The Author tries to get away with this on the fact that the MC was from the country side. I find it highly unlikely that even someone from the country side would have never been expose to any stories or games related to cultivation or even fantasy. If that was the case, the Author should have said the MC grew up in a Cave where they just learn how to make fire. I tired to keep reading but once I got to chapter 100, I just can take it any more.
This novel is one of the few I look forward to.Most novels are very generic and while this novel is not like a whole new world, I at least want to point the focus towards the consistent quality of chapters.Up to now everything we/I read is important. I jave yet to see any fillers or something similar which is quite an achievement if you compare some novels of this type.But let's rate the novel:Writing Quality: 5 Stars-As I already mentioned the grammar and structur of even basic sentences is very good. It is not 100% but I have yet to see a novel without typos.-The basic storyline is consistent and the story doesn't get jumbled around so the story stays in an easy to understand path.Stability of Updates: 5 Stars-7 chapters per week plus bonus chapters for certain milestones-I don't think we had any chapter missing in between.Story Development: 4 Stars-Right now it's just 4 Stars but the story is still at it's starting point. Judging by the current pace its gonna be 7-10 chapters till the story really kicks off.-I'll adjust the Stars at that point.Character Design: 4 Stars-This is actually hard to decide. At this point the MC is slightly generic. On the other side I can see the potential for the future since the story has yet to fix itself onto his current behaviour-Side characters are sufficiently described and their mood and actions are well presented.-We got the normal bitchy character, stern teacher/elder type, cute jail-loli etc.-Let's see what else will appear.World Background: 4 Stars-Same as with the characters: cultivation world, god like super cultivatiors, sects and probably kingdoms-We have the “previous“ MC the super strong imprisoned dude who either died or his body is left somewhere.-Aside from that we have the normal knowledge about cultivation(dual), herbs and alchemy etc.As of now the story is normal based on the characters and story line, and otherwise we have a nice writing style and the possibility of the author making something different from the other eastern fantasy novels.I am excited for the future.
It's just bad, that's it. I just read the first two chapters and it already made me drop it. That's how bad it is. The author kept belittling the healer class, it's frustrating.
great !!! I'm loving this
The story-line carried well throughout the entire book until the ending. The ending seemed abrupt, rushed and lacked content/drama that could have been built for additional spin offs and left too many things unaddressed.
waaaahhhhh! mind blowing..soooo waiting for updates
What a fantastically written book. Loved it from beginning to end. I couldn't put it down. Best book by far.
Love love love this book so many ups and downs and so worth the read! This author is amazing and read her books she is amazing!!!!
Chapter 4-24 is missing. Please update and thank you!
Such a good author, read a couple of your finished books and I must say that so far I love this book too!
More chapters pleas
A great book. Love it