Wise Lizard boy gets beat up 10/10 Well written, fun story
I know you wrote that you stoped writting because of RL issues but couldnt it be good to write atleast 1 chapter a week or month until your sytuation will be stable? Then you could continue to write more.
after sign in at least give something reasonable. Sun god lower body, Sun talisman, Devils eyes spell etc. These are all unreasonable and no one can connect it with anything. I know that these novel have Chinese origins, so Chinese belives and myths are added.But make it simple, no one want to see an mc that is just getting powerful. A game ends when you play all levels.
I really like this novel. It's a novel you can read in your free time with a refreshing, light hearted take on cultivation. I totally enjoy reading this novel and hope the author would add some good plot in the future without ruining the feel.
We have a MC who suffered the pain of being dematerialized in his death and then endured more than two billion years of disputes where his soul and mind were strengthened, and then we are presented with the character of Juno, basically a crutch for when the MC needs and that he received knowledge about the powers of the MC and of human history, things that obviously the MC himself could have received directly, or is that what we learned from all this? that we have a strong MC that the author is making it weaker for us to push our throat into a valid reason for the existence of Juno, his future romantic partner, and that is simply a drug !!! this is making history lose a lot of quality sincerely !! sad to see such a good story lose potential as a result of such nonsense !!! Besides, the story is very good and well worked in general.
Though perhaps not the best serious read, this is the best comedy system novel by far that I have read on qidian!P.s. this is my second review (the first was deleted by an original novel author with another book which I find quite good as well [if you take offence to this comment, please don't blindly delete it again; your novel is more engaging in terms of storyline but this one is better for pure comedy])!
Only 22 free chapters that direct 1 star
I won't lie, I didn't expect a writing quality of this level. It's hard to find books with good writing quality these days man! The author knows what he's doing with his story and although the start may feel slow, you won't be feeling bored anywhere.I really liked Seth's personality, his young master aura as author puts it is enjoyable to read.The conversations doesn't just feel plain text, it really feels like characters are conversing. The story is in its early phase so the world is still developing but I can tell, if done right, it'll be an interesting world to experience.All in all I think it's a good start and a potential great story.And the writing quality man!
I had this very thought out and amazing review.... and then I accidentally deleted it. Sigh* Well the key points were that this novel surprised me with how good it is and how it doesn’t do the things that annoy me in other novels like unrealistic face slapping and harems. And finally it was that I am excited and wish to see this novel continue further in the future. And doggy gif here because I think it’s cute.✌️
roses are redviolets are blueI love this novel so will you !!!!!!!it started slowly but as I kept on reading it on w.u.x I fell in love with it, so here I am
Up to chapter 35 review.So first I'm going to give honest props to a self-published work that's pretty decently written especially considering that English may not be this person's primary language.I'll also say that although it seems pretty quick I generally lean towards faster powerups and faster fights. The MC definitely taking the starting strong route and keeps it blazing - and no antagonist really gives him a fight of any consequence so far.Now to the parts I don't like. While I guess I'm ok with the s*xy but not quite ultimate beauty being his first, it really felt like it went super fast. As in underage fast. More problematic is that there were then developments to show this will probably end up as a harem novel as of course his immature eyes start wandering.But then we get to Chapter 35. I don't know why this is a thing in some CN novels but it is very disturbing when now this happens at an underage level. So I'll just say it - r*ape is wrong and even more so against children. You and all the sick f*cks who love this kind of violent behavior can go to hell. I hope you find mental help before you end up in jail living out all your decadent fantasies. As for me, I'm done with this story.
like the way the chapters are being revised and the plot is easier to follow, can you focus more on it first and not add more new chapters for the moment? Stuck at the 58th chapter and just wondering what is happening man.. do something about it