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lecture agréable merci beaucoup de nous offrir la chance de lire
an interesting story, because apart from the neat grammar, the character development and the world are very good, besides this story is also addictive. Keep up the good work author!!! ??????
I realy realy like this novelI realy realy like this novelI realy realy like this novelI realy realy like this novelI realy realy like this novel
The one part I don't like about this is the romance. The author didn't give us enough time with Delia for us to develop a connection with her. You can't just make her stay away for like 10 years, with barely anything about her for like 200 chapters, and then expect us to accept her just showing up, then them suddenly falling in love, and then getting married! That's not all though, though. The author makes it seem like she's someone who is in the novel to just comfort Linley when someone close to him either dies or breaks his heart, and then suddenly introducing her as a love interest while we know basically nothing about her, except she is a good mage from a good family. I know that I already said it, but that's 200+ chapters, and ten years in the novel with barely any mention of her, and then the Author reintroduces her as if we are expected to be happy about Linley marrying someone we barely know anything about! Maybe I'm the only one mad about this, but it actually annoys me, and is one of the reasons I stopped reading this novel.
Been hooked on this story for the past 2 years and it's always getting better. Also this is the best place to read this story for free as the updates are constant and when there are issues with translation or chapter updates they are resolved quickly.
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I love fantasy and I love this book !! It is a beautiful work of art, from the plot to the design of the characters, I barely go through the first chapters but I feel that I will continue to accompany Longwei and Lei in their adventure, a round of applause for the author for the incredible work he is doing!!!