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Hey guys, I decided to write another review. Well, the book didn't live up to expectations like I expected in it's first 3 months. I'm at fault for that, I dragged the system reveal for far too long and for that I'm sorry. Ok, here's the proper reviewWriting Quality: It's not perfect but I tried my best to make it as smooth as possible Story Development: I think I at least did above average in this aspect, I paid a lot of attention to the story, storyline, and power ranking before starting it.Character Design: Not perfect but I tried to make each character as unique as possible.Updating Stability: Pretty stable, as of now, 16 chapters per week.World Background: I tried my best to make it not too complicated while still trying hard to restrain myself from hitting.Well, that's my review. No matter what though, deciding to read this book is your choice, I hope you do though and as for my readers, thanks for reading.
Filled with fake ratings, garbage novel that doesn't make sense, I can't believe there can be so many spammed 5 star reviews made by level 1 and 2 accounts. It disgusts me, made me waste my time reading this thing.
Gosto muito da história em principal as partes cômicas e ês uma história que desperta muito a curiosidade em principal sobre os pais do protagonista que sem ofensas tem um passado so de imaginar sombrio deverás a dizer mas fora isso a unica pergunta na minha mente e como essa história pode me pegar desprevinidade de geitos desveras intrigante pois eu não fasso idéia de onde isso vai parar que me leva ao fato que eu sou deveras adivinha mas não consigo adivinhar onde essa história vai foi um dos motivos deu gostar dela e ela e um otimo trabalho de expressão pra ter uma idéia mesmo que possua erros ortográfico nas pontuações de virgula em alguns lugares essa obra e sem dúvida tem menos erros de ortografias e conteúdo que meus livros escolares então caie entre nos eu posso ler isso 1.000 vezes e entende tudo e fazer uma redação total sobre a história até aqui mas jamais conseguiria fazer de dois textos de história daqueles livros de datico que estão até errados em conteúdo porque eu ja escontrei neles coisas que não eram para estar ali ou nen existiu fim da história livros escolares fazem menos sentido que as noveis escritas por que eu ja cheguei a achar mas de 13 exercicios errados em apenas um livro de datico e erros ortográfico se eu realmente procura dava 3 vezes mas do que tem do primeiro capitulo dessa novel ao ultimo ?história incrível ?
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Honestly, I liked the original story more than this changed one, because the MC there suffered more severely which would give him the "desire" to be much powerful after his regression. But it's just my opinion. As for my review, the story is awesome, clear as there weren't much errors grammatically and the author didn't change much from what was written in the original so for the readers who read this in the past, we won't be confused.I'll be waiting for the succeeding chapters and that's the end of my review.
wow, such good English, m really not educated enough......,........................................,..........................................
love it
do we reall need another this bs .mm
This is good keep up the good work author.and if you can.....MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEMORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEMORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEMORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEMORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEalso....Thank you for your excellent work!!!
7 Chapters in, and if the story's gonna go on like this I'm out. Mc's relationships feel way too forced, or maybe people in that world are just all that way? Original premise, not my cup of tea. MC too blunt. Feels like he wouldn't be able to keep any secrets and will just boldly expose all his information. Whatever I hate it, but it doesn't mean you will so here's the honest rating.Writing Quality 4.5/5 - Too many curse words for me, it just throws me off. Stability of Updates 5/5 - Dunno, just started it. Story Development 4.5/5 - Dunno. Character Design 5/5 - No cardboard or cookie cutter. Pretty original.World Background 2/5 - Just 7 chapters in, but I'm hating both the mmo and the real world. And the reasons mc is where he is. Whatever.