Well this is my sugestion for you :
Good side :
- Interesting character
- Easy to read
Bad side : a bit spoiler
- I dont get it why the MC is so rash and softie. I feel it become contradiction because actually he is smart and have strong wisdom that how the story line tell us.
- I dont know how to say this mmmmm...that the story say he have character merchant but he lose so much.
- He doesnt know politic, but still fooling around with noble. (I feel like crying now trust me.)
Well the think make this bad because contradiction for what actually the MC do and the story line say. So, I mean example if he is hot blooded, he will love fight and easy get angry but if we make the contradiction that line become like this "He doesnt love to fight and calm person". Well this is still just my opinion but actually this story have well background but the story line sometimes tell us the spoiler, you can say that I more like doesnt know because it will have more surprise and we can feel the helpless side in MC.
My opinion based my current progress (ch 36). Story has really good potential. Characters seem interesting, the same can be said about world setting. Unfortunately there is one huge minus to this story - number of mistakes in chapters is really high. It's understandable to make them but so far it looks like chapters are not checked even oncebefore publication.
Hard to follow, constantly changing the talking styles and adding emojis. If you can stomach that plus broken / hard to read English give it a try. Failed reading it twice
R I am I am I am I am I am I a I'm not ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? I am I am I am I am
It's great LN, recommended ❤️ give it a go.Honestly I feel a bit insecure reading it, like how his bodyguard getting stronger instead of him.l know MC is strong overpowered but still a child he doesn't know how to fight or love or magic. I don't want his bodyguard to become stronger before him.
hjfgjjjvcbjyfvjigvbjhjfgjjjvcbjyfvjigvbjhjfgjjjvcbjyfvjigvbjhjfgjjjvcbjyfvjigvbjhjfgjjjvcbjyfvjigvbjhjfgjjjvcbjyfvjigvbjhjfgjjjvcbjyfvjigvbj
♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤????????????????????????????