Post 75+ chapter binge review.
First, I don't think I've made as many intra chapter comments for one story as I have today. I've been thinking about this and I think that's a reflection of my engagement with a story. And some of these elements which elicit commentary include humor, interesting plot points, and relatable characters.
Which is to say that although yes, this is a sports-themed novel with some pretty standard elements (physical/skills growth, tournaments, etc.), and less than perfect editing notwithstanding, this story really has a way of drawing you in as a reader and engaging you.
This is self-published work and the author doesn't appear to be a professional. But he has taken one important storytelling tip to heart and that is "Write about what you know". It's so obvious that the author not only has a very passionate and knowledgeable perspective on basketball, but it is clear that many things he is able to write about comes from personal experience.
But at the end of the day all of it just comes together with good storytelling - there are interesting characters, moments of levity balanced against thoughtfulness, adequate ******* and release, and a pretty good pace to story development.
Either way, I'm engaged and looking forward to following this story for a long time. Mad respect to the author for his efforts.
I think it's great so far I would recommend it
Please pick this book and continue it!
can't wait to read the continuation of this book...
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Great story love the concept .. definitely an amateur writer but still good. The biggest problem is translation / editing quality tanks and becomes almost unreadable after free chapters end. it's hard to follow who's doing what at times.
now im writing this review because the other people i have seen reviewing this are either butt hurt people cause their novel didn't get chosen or people who gives 5 star for some small reason i read most of the reviews but i haven't seen one that actually analyses the novel so ill do that.
So first off
Translation quality is 4,7 stars out of 5
This is mainly because of the fact that there are practically no grammar mistakes and the transitions are smooth enough said.
Stability of updates 4,5 out of 5
since this hasn't come to web novel yet i cant expect much from it will probably upload a massive amount of chapter at first then slow down to 1 chapter a day or so and i cant really judge it so it will get a 4.5 from my expectations.
Story development 2.8 out of 5
While it is an interesting story it has the feeling of many other novels that i have read that are interesting in the beginning and repetitive in the end not to mention there are a lot of cliches in this novel like a system, being a nice guy and unnaturally becoming loyal when they previously wanted to kill that guy.
And to tell the truth it feels like hes bound to the world by the things the previous owner did i dont see a reason for him to rescue his disciple that betrayed him and i dont understand how that could offend the main character so the reasons are vague for what he does or why he does things these ways.
Character design 3 out of 5 stars
They are average but as i stated before they have unnaturally changed their personality from deadly psychos to loyal somewhat good dogs in around 1 or 2 months considering they have lived for at least a 100 years im surprised they could change that much by some major benefit
The only other reason that can explain their personality changing that much is that they are acting cause they think their master can see everything but from their thought process that we are shown that is not very likely.
World background 3.2 out of 5
It hasn't been developed much they practically put out some sect names witch the only ones of importance are nether sect heavenly something and clarity sect, after that they put out some cultivating rank thingy yet the only thing i remember are divine court something and eight Brahma something they haven't explained **** and i cant understand why they have done so.
My personal opinion of this novel is that it is quite good but its not 5 star nor is it one star if this is you first read it i suggest you try it but if you are tired from cliches such as system Mc walking into traps that he could avoid if he was a bit more cold then dont do this novel the only good point is that i haven't seen a young master but considering his position i dont think a young master would dare trouble him.
oh one more thing i dont think there will be romance so if you dont like that you should also try this novel
for the people i talked about in the beginning
im not trying to offend you by saying that you are butt hurt but im trying to say that its very childish to leave a review yet not having read the book
same goes for keep up the good work 5 stars review im starting to have serious trust issues because of you reviews witch are made after reading some pages and being like wow i like this novel lets put some 5 star reviews i dont know what happens later in the story but i like this novel and i dont know how to judge a book so ill just say some word to fill in the word count.
so ill end with this dont review a book without judging the book from all the point you've seen like translation character story dont just go for your personal opinion judge it from an objective position and see the logical false things and point that out since that will help a story much more than some 5 star or 1 star reviews.
They are deleting every 1 star review cuz "they all are trolls and aren't really doing reviews" but don't do anything to the hundreds of 5star reviews that don't say why they put max stars.
Because of the unfairness of this website now only the high rated reviews are there, this novel had a score of 2.8 stars and overnight it became 4.4..
I absolutely love this story. Quite shocked it's not higher on the voting scale. But the members of the men of culture group reign supreme along with some other nonsense stories that I can't get into. But back to the story.
From the start the story behind very slightly cliche and then goes off into this massively different tale from what I was expecting. I didn't even realize I had been reading for so long as I was quickly immersed in the story losing out on some much needed sleep. But that's just how good and unique it is.
The characters actually have depth to them. The mc isn't stupidly op from the start. He uses his brains a lot to get through situations. Which is a plus in my book because I love it when the mc has a brain and uses it. And the skills are not generic they actually have real thought put into them.If this was really a game I would love to play it.
And for once I don't mind the actual real world interactions after a couple chapters of gameplay. That's about as much as I can say without spoilers.
But the release rate is very steady. There is a lot of world building in the background without being monotonous. And because of everything listed so far I have left one of my very few reviews. ☺️
This story though my first story in this site is worth reading. Likes how the author portrays her characters, and the way the story flows . I will just say that it is a book worth giving a chance and I promise you won't be disappointed.
About mc
Family think they need to get him a job after highschool because he has no scope passing. They fear to let him go distance place bcose he will get killed by his uncontrollable tongue.
Teachers think about him as craziest students. Sometimes they they think he walk bw narrow path of genious and craziness
For school he is a legend. laziest and craziest student ever
Gf to be thought about him was " only mad people like him smile untill his death"
Readers know he never be a genius only be crazy. He even lazy copy answer to win exam.he got always zero marks unless he got missions from system.
About gf to be : genius,tsundare,viloent, loli beauty even system fears her
It's a shame that it wasn't chosen.
hello author can you explain rewrite pace,
are you going to rewrite the whole thing or locked chapter, and why are you rewriting, I am quite curious plus when do I read this book and thx if you read this.
all i will say is