From what i've read (chapter 9 50%)
The general writing and story is quite decent but lacks a few components to really enjoy the novel. That being the fantasy part. It lacks core systems that Are logical and easy to understand such AS instead of might use strength or spirit damage to magic damage also in the world you have set up i see it hard for the character to find trials where they
Get stronger, more information Lore, character development. I see they have quest via the system so this might change but Even then it would lack some small components I think if you add magical realism with a good magic or aura system it would make the story more enjoyable for the reader.
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very good, adequately sized chapters, interesting characters, story with no obvious clichés, no irrelevant chapters to fill, I'm looking forward to the next chapters
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The novels have become frivolous, boring, and perverted because of the author. He needs to read my comment just to benefit: the handsome hero with a friendly and kind family, a beautiful and warm mother, a beautiful or domineering sister, a likable and shy little brother, and a strong-hearted father, of course always the hero's family people They are good and enforce the law and love people of course they are angels, you will not find the hero's family of sadistic villains, thieves and murderers. And all the girls in the world of course only who have a dazzling beauty need his help, and those poor little girls feel the responsibility to help and save them, the hero whose biggest concern when he gets super power is to save humanity and the world. Something disgusting and vulgar all the novels have become a deviant character. The reader hates such novels because they have nothing to do with human truth, because they depict angels of peace and love. We wish the authors to change this trivial pattern and show us the true human instincts. Selfishness, anger, murder, theft, arrogance, pride, fraud, deception, impersonal, self-interested, does not care about anyone, does not interfere in the affairs of others, does not help people, this is how the novel will become interesting You will not be able to predict the actions of the characters The events will become unexpected And enthusiastic, and it will bring a new revolution in the field of novels because such a character does not exist. There is one novel that I know is Revenend insanity. I guarantee you the success of your novel even if you are a beginner. Don't make the hero crazy, don't make him stupid, make him only care about his interests
Good story content and everything. But story became very dramatic and some parts are very useless girls are like prostitutes who just go for money
16 chapter in and what can I say, I'm already invested.The story has been great so far, I would love to see Alex in action but I know that's going to happen soon.Keep up the good work author and don't you dare stop.
I only read the first 5 chapters but I can tell that the story is worth sticking around. The writing style is good and you will completely understand what's going on. (Unlike in some other novels cough cough)I have yet to read it enough to judge the world and characters but I know it'll be good. (Yes I'm a bit biased for VR novels hehe)
The story was engaging and captivating, and I found myself fully immersed in the world and characters. The plot was well-crafted and thought-provoking, and I found myself constantly on the edge of my seat. The author did an excellent job of bringing the story to life and making me feel like I was a part of it.
Book is good although some parts confuse me. Author i will like to get your reply for it Age system of different species. This really have many holes like elves have 3 times the human age but if you see it in more practical way doesn't it seem like elves are 3 times slower than human in all things. Like if 30 human years is considered average for becoming adept wizard, so it will take 90 human years for elves to do it. This really confuses me and 32 years is 13 years old girl , bro even if she doesn't physically seem 32 years but mentally she will be 32 and if you make 32 years naive then doesn't it mean she is dumb and slow compared to humans .Author i will really like to hear your explanation
This is the best novel I've ever read
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Even though this novel is a good one, but a pity it is a copied from **********, as a result, Webnovel could only release until chapter 689 and then ********** banned them from uploading further chapters.
I admit that it’s convenient to read on this Webnovel app, but most of the novel (Translated Ones) are completely copies from **********, it makes me hate this site. While people could read them on ********** for free and here, we need to pay to read the novels on Webnovel. Truly shameless.